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wynter333A — The Ragged Edge...
Published: 2007-10-15 00:32:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 10245; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 139
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"Dammit! C...c'mon!" TK growled, her voice a strained, frustrated near-whine as she pumped her shoulders up and down harder, feeling the edge of the ragged metal slide harmlessly across the surface of the cords for another half-a-dozen heartbeats. She was panting heavily, and the muscles in her calves burned as they strained to hold her up on her toes and help her sawing efforts, which had been going on for several minutes already. But with every downward jerk, she found it harder to push back up again. Little-by-little she sagged back down toward her heels, less-and-less of the high-positioned, rusty "blade" rubbing uselessly against the binding bola cords.When her feet finally fell flat against the floor again, TK let her head and shoulders sag forward as she paused to catch her breath and regather her strength for another try. Rank discouragement was etched onto young heroine's strained, weary face...but there was deep, deep anger as well. Her claws had done less than nothing to these strands, and so had the last two bits of metallic junk with which she'd tried to saw through them. This slab of fallen metal, she'd had a good feeling about...but it was proving no more effective at helping her win her freedom than its previous bretheren. The cords still hugged her like a remorseless, synthetic octopus. They hadn't slipped, hadn't budged, hadn't loosened, and hadn't cut. If she hadn't known better - and she did, as the feeling would have been abundantly clear to a furred being like herself - TK would have said that the bola strands were glued to her, so firmly and irrevocably did they hold. She fought back the wave of despair which flowed over her like molasses...but it was growing harder to do so with every passing moment...
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Comments: 17
Roninshinobi [2007-10-15 15:50:46 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, even if she cut loose those things would be holding on to her still. Sonya definatly has all the bases covered.
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side-effect55 [2007-10-15 12:30:44 +0000 UTC]
Seems like she's getting really nervous. Go TK, go!
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wynter333A In reply to side-effect55 [2007-10-15 12:58:22 +0000 UTC]
*nods uneasily* It does look like she's getting a little frayed around the nerves, doesn't it? Personally not used to seeing her like that...
*sends beams of spite and hate at Sonya...who is totally oblivious*
But it sure looks like TK's not giving up! So keep cheerin' for her, my friend...I'm sure it'll help.
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side-effect55 In reply to wynter333A [2007-10-15 13:01:23 +0000 UTC]
If it keeps her wiggling in those ropes, I'll just keep cheering for a while.
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wynter333A In reply to side-effect55 [2007-10-15 14:19:50 +0000 UTC]
Hehe...then cheer away, my friend... I'll appreciate the results too.
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side-effect55 In reply to wynter333A [2007-10-15 17:11:58 +0000 UTC]
GO, TK, go! GO, TK, go! GO, TK, go! GO, TK, go! GO, TK, go! GO, TK, go! GO, TK, go! GO, TK, go!
......
It's emabarrasing that I run out of breath before she does *blushes*
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wynter333A In reply to black-Kat-3D-studio [2007-10-15 14:19:21 +0000 UTC]
All it'll take is a little determination (which she's still got, even now...) and a little time...
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wynter333A In reply to black-Kat-3D-studio [2007-10-19 15:25:15 +0000 UTC]
Nope.
Those cords are TOUGH.
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Tails-and-Cosmo [2007-10-15 04:50:44 +0000 UTC]
wow talk about suspence im on the edge of my comp chair keep it up i want to see more
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wynter333A In reply to Tails-and-Cosmo [2007-10-15 14:18:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, man. Really pleased that you're finding it such a tense story. And thanks much for taking the time to say so. Always appreciate that, I do.
And rest assured, more is on the way very, very soon...
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Crystal124 [2007-10-15 00:39:35 +0000 UTC]
I hope she gets away in one peice, seeing how Sonya is making TK's journey more challenging, it's hard to tell what might happen as she travels farther
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wynter333A In reply to Crystal124 [2007-10-15 14:17:29 +0000 UTC]
*nods*
Agree with ya on all counts there, my sister...
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Crystal124 In reply to wynter333A [2007-10-17 00:37:53 +0000 UTC]
But I have a feeling she'll become stronger if she gets out of this
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