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Maruto
Published: 2009-05-24 03:33:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 2893; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 292
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Description Ok, this is a picture of my Mary-Sue character, Maruto. (drawn once before: [link] ) I drew this for 's Naruto Mary-Sue contest and I edited her story a bit so it wasn't completely copy/paste from the other pic.
Just threw this together in a few hours. I made it a chibi coz I was running out of time (stupid procrastination)... but maybe it adds to her "kawaii-ness"

Name: Maruto Snowflake Uchiha-Hyuuga

Age: 16

Village: Konoha (but she left it coz she was bored lolz)

Rank: S-class missing nin (but she used to be liek ANBU!)

Clan: Her mother was from the Hyuuga clan and her father was from the Uchiha clan so she is BOTH (lolz how awesome iz dat!)

Kekkei Genkai: She has one eye of sharingan and one eye of byakugan but she can also use them both together (AND the rinnegan for some reason) to create the awesomagan (Which makes her eyes all rainbow and glowy!)!

Bijuu: The 10 tailed smoke fox. It gives her all the awesome powers of ALL the other bijuu but Maruto does not get hurt at all! Her demon also gives her those ears and tail and the Naruto whiskers! Oh and the bijuu is called Gary coz that is a very good demon name!

Jutsu: Can do any jutsu ever, even other people's bloodline limits because of her awesomagan!

Story: Maruto grew up alone coz her mother died when she was three and her dad never wanted her so he kept her in the basement and hardly ever fed her and didn't love her but then when Itachi killed all the Uchiha clan he found her and set her free coz she was soooo kawaii and he thought she would keep Sasuke company and be his friend. HOW ADORABLE! LOLZ!!!
Then Maruto went to live with the Hyuuga clan and was bestest buddies with Neji and Hinata oh and Sasuke too but he went to live somehere else LOL! Then her demon came out and it scared everyone so they made her leave and she went and lived with Naruto who felt her pain and instantly fell in love with her, but Sasuke had already fallen in love with her so those two fought all the time and it made Maruto very sad so she would go cry but then would be comforted by Sakura and Ino and Tenten and Hinata and any other Konoha girls coz they were all liek BFFs!!!
So then after graduating the academy and becoming an ANBU at 10 years old (omg she is a prodigy btw!) she got bored and went to orochimaru for more power!
He taught her a lot of jutsu and she mastered them all and then he gave her a curse seal and she mastered it in liek 2 hours so orochimaru wanted her for his new body but she said no and since he was scared of her power he let her go. In her wanderings she met a lot of people including Gaara who fell in immediate luuurve with her but she didn't love him so she ran away again and then she joined AKATSUKI coz they wanted her power and demon but she said they couldnt have her demon but she would work for them! They said that was cool coz they thought she was rly hot so didn't want to kill her extracting her demon (not that she would die lol she's TOO STRONG to die of sumthin silly liek that!
In Akatsuki she was clearly the most powerful member and everybody loved her. Leik REALLY loved. And Deidara taught her how to make clay bombs and Sasori taught her how to make puppets. Oh did I mention that she can come apart like Kakuzu with the strings (but her strings aren't visible coz ewwww, they look gross!) and can be cut up and do curse stuff like Hidan (but she doesn't have to keep sacrificing to any silly god)? Well she can and all the other stuff of the Akatsuki too coz she can do ALL JUTSU remember?
Yeah, so she partied with Akatsuki for a bit and fell in love with Deidara, and they went everywhere together. She also became bestest best friends with Tobi and they would pull pranks on the other Akatsuki together and she would get her nails and hair done with Konan who was really nice to Maruto but was also totally jealous of her and worried that she would steal Pein away from her but that would be silly coz Maruto was in luv with Deidara! LOL! But then Deidara died so she became really depressed and emo and set out to get her revenge on Sasuke, but she couldn't kill him coz he really loved her but she was like "ew no you're my cousin or something" haha, Sasuke is a sick puppy! So sasuke went to destroy Konoha, I don't know why, something completely unrelated to Maruto, but when Pein did it first he was all like NOOO and asked Maruto to help him get revenge on Pein and any survivors! She said no and left him to be emo and then she came and talked to Nagato when he was talking to Naruto but she accidentally killed him OOPS :S but it didn't matter coz he was just talking and talking and talking about nothing so them Maruto re-built Konoha in a day using some awesome jutsu and resurrected all the people who were killed by Pein so everyone was happy and made Maruto Hokage and she continued to spread peace throughout the ninja world coz she was the REAL chosen one and then she made world peace where everyone was equal and all was good and happy YAY!
THE END

I hope you were able to keep your sanity after reading that!
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SilentPajero [2011-09-20 06:52:19 +0000 UTC]

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mintwinter [2010-06-29 22:11:03 +0000 UTC]

xD

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KarinCosplayer [2010-03-01 02:43:56 +0000 UTC]

My brain just shit itself.

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beffles In reply to KarinCosplayer [2010-03-01 05:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Then my work here is done!

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LittleMouseValentine [2009-10-25 20:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap, if another n00b asks me what a Mary Sue/Gary Stu is, I'm seriously going to show them this! Fan-Freaking-tastic. I felt my brain melting into insanity.

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beffles In reply to LittleMouseValentine [2009-10-26 09:43:49 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks!

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Lt-Wolf [2009-06-30 06:33:40 +0000 UTC]

You couldn't stop at one.

Could you.


Now the multiplying of bad storylines begin! NOOOO

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beffles In reply to Lt-Wolf [2009-06-30 09:27:32 +0000 UTC]

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Alicia-is-Purple [2009-05-27 03:03:47 +0000 UTC]

...Oh shab. The mighty Mary Sue returns! RUN!

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beffles In reply to Alicia-is-Purple [2009-05-27 12:55:14 +0000 UTC]


Lol, thanks for the comment and fav

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thet90 [2009-05-25 06:32:50 +0000 UTC]

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beffles In reply to thet90 [2009-05-25 09:42:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

I never had any to begin with, so count yourself lucky!

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thet90 In reply to beffles [2009-05-27 13:03:49 +0000 UTC]

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luna37 [2009-05-24 19:41:47 +0000 UTC]

[link]
You stole my eyedea!
(jk)

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beffles In reply to luna37 [2009-05-25 06:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol The eye thing some people do is just a pet hate of mine.
lol EYEdea! Clever X3

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luna37 In reply to beffles [2009-05-25 18:15:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you, thank you

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Ambox [2009-05-24 09:55:09 +0000 UTC]

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beffles In reply to Ambox [2009-05-24 10:06:57 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Both emotions AT THE SAME TIME

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Ambox In reply to beffles [2009-05-25 15:51:36 +0000 UTC]

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beffles In reply to Ambox [2009-05-26 10:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Lol, it's a song now?

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Ambox In reply to beffles [2009-05-26 11:40:49 +0000 UTC]

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beffles In reply to Ambox [2009-05-27 12:56:32 +0000 UTC]

That. Is. AWESOME! O man, I love it!

Dramatic chipmunk. HEY!

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Ambox In reply to beffles [2009-05-28 19:36:59 +0000 UTC]

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beffles In reply to Ambox [2009-05-29 08:55:41 +0000 UTC]

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chocobo-on-clay-crak [2009-05-24 04:51:31 +0000 UTC]

-snort-

Oh dear.


XDDD Great job.

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beffles In reply to chocobo-on-clay-crak [2009-05-24 05:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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5000guru [2009-05-24 03:48:48 +0000 UTC]

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beffles In reply to 5000guru [2009-05-24 04:12:30 +0000 UTC]

I reckon she knew that already coz she is SO SMART AND CLEVER OMGCAPS! But she didn't care coz she is waaaay stronger than he is

Thanks

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5000guru In reply to beffles [2009-05-24 04:39:16 +0000 UTC]

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beffles In reply to 5000guru [2009-05-24 04:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Lol yeah but Maruto would liek TOTES win >: D

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5000guru In reply to beffles [2009-05-24 05:12:33 +0000 UTC]

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beffles In reply to 5000guru [2009-05-24 05:34:21 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, yeah

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