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The final page of chapter one is here at last! Muzzless seems very happy to at last make a close up appearance. Just look at that smile!
Also! All of the current pages, including this one, are on Tapastic for your scrolling pleasure - tapastic.com/series/The-Lessfo…
The last two panels should look familiar somewhat. If they don't, then click the link next to "First >"
Ebee, there you go again, getting yourself cornered. Didn't you learn anything from the prologue? Oh, right, the whole "amnesia" thing...
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Oooo the last panel looks like the cover. Creative~
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FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
*links you to Tapastic where all you need to do is scroll*
tapastic.com/series/The-Lessfo…
But no joke thanks for letting me know because I'm very forgetful :'O
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LOL It's fine! I hope I'm not annoying you! I thought I might as well help while I was re-reading.
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No annoyance here! Very helpful, I really do appreciate it 
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Dang I love Ebbs' ears in the last two frames
;u;
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Thank you! That last panel is one of my favorite Ebee faces that I've drawn.
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SHIIIIIIIIIII--
FNODANFKSLAJLK
EBEE I SWEAR TO GODFDJAKL
WHAT DID I TELL YOU
I TOLD YOU NOT TO FOLLOW IT
WHY DID YOU AFJDKSALJDFA QUINCE HURRY AND SAVE HER
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QUINCE IS IN SNOOZEVILLE HARDCORE RIGHT NOW HE AINT HELP'N NOBODY
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Good stuff! I love where this is going so far. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far
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Uh oh.....
I thought Chapter 1 was really good. You were able to show more character development between Quince and Ebee, without dragging anything out. Plus, you ended on a cliffhanger, which always makes readers more excited for the next page!!!
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Thanks for the review, Raine! 
Haha, and I'm a sucker for cliffhangers!
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Chapter Reviews would be really nice! What did you think of Chapter 1? Does anyone have any predictions for chapter 2? (The title pages for chapter 2 are done and page 1 is almost done as well, so you can expect those next Tuesday!)
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