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Published: 2013-09-21 03:45:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1007; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 5
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Description DONT LOOK AT THE LOGO ITS BLECH AND IS JUST FILLER, really, I was just messing around with an idea and effects for that, and didn't have the patience to make something nice with the SAI tools. The logo, as well as a few other messy spots, are all things I plan on going back and finishing.

But first lemme just say I was enlightened to a wonderful painting setting on SAI and it was a lot of fun messing with it while working on this. If you can't already tell this is Ebee/Lyricless and Muzzless (the demonic muppet mouth).

I REALLY WANT TO MAKE THIS INTO A COMIC BUT ALL MY COMICS EVAPORATE *POOF*
MMFF

Help me out guys tell me what you think, I still might go back and refine this more (not counting the things I wanted to fix I mentioned before) so you can consider this a WIP. Looking at it as a thumbnail I can say I liked how this turned out but I can also we where it could use work. Suggestions?

(C) Art, Character, Concept - Me~x-EBee-x
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x-EBee-x In reply to ??? [2013-09-27 01:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm happy you like the composition.

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RayWest1982 [2013-09-21 23:56:56 +0000 UTC]

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x-EBee-x In reply to RayWest1982 [2013-09-21 23:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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RayWest1982 In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 00:00:38 +0000 UTC]

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x-EBee-x In reply to RayWest1982 [2013-09-22 01:46:08 +0000 UTC]

That's great!

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RayWest1982 In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-27 06:00:05 +0000 UTC]

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x-EBee-x In reply to RayWest1982 [2013-09-27 12:55:35 +0000 UTC]

That's so awesome

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RayWest1982 In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-27 21:14:45 +0000 UTC]

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x-EBee-x In reply to RayWest1982 [2013-09-28 01:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Tell her I say hi back! Where do you talk to her, on skype? I need to use my skype more...

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RayWest1982 In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-28 19:38:52 +0000 UTC]

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JordiMoonfall [2013-09-21 23:21:57 +0000 UTC]

This looks really awesome!

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x-EBee-x In reply to JordiMoonfall [2013-09-21 23:52:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RaineySkye [2013-09-21 16:57:18 +0000 UTC]

I think Ebee/Lyricless looks amazing! You could just leave her as is because I can't find a single flaw. All I can really think of forΒ Muzzless is maybe some more detail in his chest fur? I also noticed his fur is grey instead of white, which I'm guessing means it's dark out, so maybe some more shading to suggest the mood/time of day.

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IDK either way it's still the most amazing thing ever, and I can't wait to see more!

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x-EBee-x In reply to RaineySkye [2013-09-21 22:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Raine! Yeah I'm super happy with how she turned out I probably don't mess with her too much more except to maybe add more fur texture.

Those are all great suggestions, especially about the lighting, I'll work on that!


Thank you

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RaineySkye In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 19:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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53-c [2013-09-21 15:50:00 +0000 UTC]

omg eb youve come so far since i first watched you on dA i think it looks real good but it has the potential to look amazing if you go back and like, refine the edges and make it more detailed but thats just my opinion `w`;; it would look great either way but yeah! if you made a comic i would definitely follow through with reading it. =w=

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-21 22:34:22 +0000 UTC]

YOU ARE LIVY I JUST READ YOUR PAGE I'M SO HAPPY AND EXCITED

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-21 22:33:56 +0000 UTC]

WAIT A MINUTE YOUR LIVY/REVERSED REALITY ARENT YOU?


I THOUGHT YOU VANISHED OMG I'VE MISSED YOU

I JUST LOOKED AT YOUR GALLERY I COULD NEVER FORGET THAT STYLE

HOW ARE YOU??

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-21 23:00:49 +0000 UTC]

oMG idont knwo wht to say to all these
BUT yeah i am livy/reversedreality ya

ive been good sorta i moved to missouri and it SUCKS but yeah LONG TIME NO TALK HOW ARE YOU????Β 

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-21 23:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Bah well I'm sorry to hear Missouri sucks for you! D: But It's so awesome hearing from you again andΒ 

sssSPEAKING of improvement your art looks great! Like when I first saw it was like "jeez this style looks familiar but I don't know why?? Could it be??" and then I saw the scourge improvement meme and WOW so good. I wish I had more than 5 points to spend on a commission.

I'M GOOD I'M STILL WHERE I WAS BUT I WENT TO COLLEGE IN FLORIDA BUT THEN I CAME BACK AND NOW I'M AT A COMMUNITY COLLEGE AND ALSO I CAN DRIVE NOW AND I GOT MY FIRST JOB SO THATS NEW

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 00:05:04 +0000 UTC]

omg thank yOU IM SO HAPPY about my art now tbh omg
BUT OMG WOW IM SO GLAD THAT SOUNDS SO GOOD IVE BEEN DRIVING ITS SO FUN AND IM A SOPHOMORE NOW AND ITS SCARY BUT yeah i also just want to be a pizza deliverer. thats literally what i want tobe. a pizza deliverer.

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-22 02:02:19 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!! Oh sophomore I wish I was still a sophomore ;O; But yeah driving is so great once you get the hang of it and hey, follow your dreams yoΒ 
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You go and you deliver that pizzaΒ 

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 02:59:24 +0000 UTC]

omg wow man i actually dont like it but im getting by ya
and i WILL!!!!!! i live for pizza....

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-22 03:07:57 +0000 UTC]

I hated driving to begin with but now I find it pretty relaxing, so long as I know where I'm going, I have the worst sense of direction in the history of ever I could seriously get lost in my driveway


deliver the pizza n the pizza shall deliver u

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 14:26:26 +0000 UTC]

omg really ive loved it ever since i started and yeah tbh its one of my big stress relivers but my mom doesnt take me out to like, ever, because i dont have my permit bu t that is heR FaULT because i was supposed to get it for my birthday last january but i didnt and she refuses to get it until i pass my sophomore year with all b's its ridiculous really :\

but omg i am amazing with directions its scaryΒ 


and i will be the Greatest pizza deliverer Ever (;

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-22 17:14:47 +0000 UTC]

Whhaaaa that's so lame that you were supposed to get it but then didn't and now you have to wait so bummer.Β 

I'm jealous you should give me some of your direction talent


I would so order pizza just for you to deliver it to me yes

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 18:51:05 +0000 UTC]

yeah its pretty szdsfgjl
and ya i would i think its because i studied roads a lot i know like Everything.


good i will deliver it wherever u are even if it is 1000 miles away. true dedication.

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-22 19:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Once I drive in an area enough I'm pretty good but if I've only been there once then theirs a 95% chance I'll make a wrong turn 100% of the time


You are indeed worth of the title best pizza deliverer in the world

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 19:38:40 +0000 UTC]

OH YEAH new places are like "what" but thats what the gps is for hollah


thank u eb. i am. i will always be the one.

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-22 19:51:22 +0000 UTC]

I really need to get a gps my parents have one but they never use it except for long trips and I don't know where they keep it

But it's not like I've needed to drive somewhere far on my own really I only drive to the store, bank, gas station, work, and school

sometimes to the movies or other places but I usually have someone with me then

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 19:59:57 +0000 UTC]

ya i mean if you dont know your way around yo town i think thats a problem omgΒ 
BUT YEAH! maybe just ask them???

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-22 20:04:21 +0000 UTC]

I will if I ever need too, plus I know how to work it better than them they always ask me to plug addresses in for them haha

One of these days I just want to go drive in some direction and get lost and then try to find my way back home

I had to do that the other week when a road block made me go in a different direction than what I usually do on the way to school I was almost late and then on the way home I had to go a different way again and I swear I found every school in the neighboring districts before finding my town again, and I found two streets with cool names, one was named "This way" and the other was "My Way".

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 20:09:11 +0000 UTC]

omg yea do that
THATS INCREDIBLE ive seen a street like gay street before back in texas but thats it

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-22 21:04:41 +0000 UTC]

I saw a gay street in DC tooΒ 

If I ever own a house with a long driveway I'm going to name the driveway Go A Way

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-22 23:11:33 +0000 UTC]

OMG GOOD best street name

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-21 22:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you so much! <3 Yeah I definitely plan on going back and sharpening it up, I was just too excited about it and wanted to post it x3 Thanks for the short critique, I appreciate it! And I'm glad your interested in the comic, that's super encouraging.


And I'm curious, and sorry I can't remember - when did you first watch me?

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53-c In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-21 23:01:13 +0000 UTC]

and yw for the feedback btw im always glad to give advice `w`

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x-EBee-x In reply to 53-c [2013-09-21 23:11:17 +0000 UTC]

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BirdyCrossing [2013-09-21 04:47:01 +0000 UTC]

omg the shading and colors are beautiful<3

I really hope you decide to go through with the comic, this seems really cool! :3

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x-EBee-x In reply to BirdyCrossing [2013-09-21 14:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I hope I do too! Haha.

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Sea-Archive [2013-09-21 04:39:06 +0000 UTC]

OH wow I love this so much. The title is wow and ajfdlk;sdfkjas;dfj So amazing >U< one thing I can't do is read the title right. I know what it's supposed to say but it drags my eye around it weird and keeps wanting to read Β 'Less fortunate the beings' or 'the less fortunate the beings'Β 

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x-EBee-x In reply to Sea-Archive [2013-09-21 14:32:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Fluff! And for pointing that out, I work on the readability of the title when I redesign it.

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Sea-Archive In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-21 19:18:11 +0000 UTC]

okay cool ;u; Love it though. The title its self 'the less fortunate beings' is pretty awesome ;u; I have a love for awesome titles tho~

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x-EBee-x In reply to Sea-Archive [2013-09-21 22:28:38 +0000 UTC]

Me too cool titles are the best <3 I'm glad you like it ^^ I actually made a new design while I was at work today, when I scan it or redraw it digitally/whatever could I show it to you to get an opinion?

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Sea-Archive In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-21 22:40:38 +0000 UTC]

: D YEAH I'D LOVE TO SEE IT YES

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x-EBee-x In reply to Sea-Archive [2013-09-21 22:42:53 +0000 UTC]

OKAY I'LL SEND YOU A MESSAGE WITH IT WHEN I CAN

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Sea-Archive In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-21 22:45:30 +0000 UTC]

: D WEEEEEEE *BOUNCES EXCITEDLY*

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Ski-Machine [2013-09-21 04:33:42 +0000 UTC]

COMIC! COMIC! COMIC! COMIC!

YES YES YES YES YES!

A great way to make comics keep from evaporating is to rough out all the pages and then do them backwards then when you post them you can drop one or two pages a week while you work on other stuff.

or you end up like me promising to do the above, doing it for 3 months then drop off the face of the planet

Fff I actually liked the logo a lot an the brushyness. and the eyes

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x-EBee-x In reply to Ski-Machine [2013-09-21 14:34:17 +0000 UTC]


Does that mean for the entire book or per chapter?
Thank you!

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Ski-Machine In reply to x-EBee-x [2013-09-21 16:14:16 +0000 UTC]

I tend to do it per segment since my comic branches off in two right now from Mitch's group to Scott's situation. So normally I'll rough out all of Scott's situation, then finish that and when that's being put out one week at a time I start roughing out Mitch's POV and so on


But yes, comics, lots of comics. Me likey the comics

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