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Published: 2005-04-09 10:30:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 126; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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i remember that daythat day that meant the world
lemon scented kisses
a quiet, merlot haze
no one else exhisted...we barely exhisted
your touch was chill
cold hands, warm heart
i was lost
your eyes swallowed me
taste...tasteing your soul from within
emerging from the silence renewed
you hinted at something extra-ordinary
something perposterous
the unthinkable...but i believed it anyway
it felt like demolition
two things colliding into one great explosion
naked
ballet between the sheets
and we danced... oh, how we danced...
you lead
and i followed
the scene was filmed in black and white
fluid motion
a rise...and a fall
rise and fall
rise
rise
rise into the next form of life
reincarnation of the most carnal sorts
crumpled heap of being
held tight like a ghost to it's home
salty cheeks
sweaty extremities
pure, unadulterated bliss
you said you loved me
and you still do
i own your entire being
paid in full with my soul
i still remember that day... and i still crave it
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"no one else exhisted...we barely exhisted"
I really like that line.
kudos.
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thank you!
i didn't want to have this turn out like most erotic poetry... ya know, where it sounds really sensual and well written until the work "cock" just shows up, killing the feel of the poem.
i swear, the way you talk about my work, it sounds like i've crawled into your head and spilled the memories out for you. i'm so glad that my work makes you feel good, hell, i'm happy to have it make ANYONE feel the same way i do about it!
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