vermillionbird [2003-05-23 16:57:10 +0000 UTC]

well, what's there is great.

it seems, though, that the black, at least to me, only reads as blank.
I think something, anything vaguely appropriate to the scene
would add depth; or scanlines, possibly, if you prefer
to present it as a display.

also, I think the strictness of the design works against the image;
"real" factories or schematics tend to be less regular than that
out of functional necessity.

the combined bits of machinery are wonderful.
they're very tangible, in a surreal way.

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filedebop [2003-05-23 15:18:55 +0000 UTC]

it's is a good pic the lighting is cool ..... but I personally would put in a bit more roundness and deformity to thr structures ..... but it excellent the way it is .....

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Urus-28 [2003-05-23 15:00:59 +0000 UTC]

I like the details but i feel there is no real coherence in the picture, ther is two main parts and i cannot feel the link between them, of course it is the same subject but a true dynamic is missing.
Continue to work you will make greats works

On va y arriver à force

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