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SDevilHeart — D.O.R. Ch.1 Pg 13
Published: 2008-08-26 05:58:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 2452; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 10
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DAMN IT MIDDY!!! i can feel that pokethrough the comic. D< but i wonder about this, is it really just a temptation to try, or is it more of a feeling? well either way i must be brain dead.and also, sorry guys i lied. i said there are 14 pages to chapter 1, there's actually 15. i forgot that i split the last page in half cause it seemed a little long. 2 more pages till the first chapter ends. you guys excited as i am?
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remember to look out for spelling errors and i'll make you one of these~
[link] people in here
-in the order they appeared-
IMAGINE EVERYONE IN THIS STORY AS A HUMAN [link]
next page: [link]
previous page: [link]
cover: [link]
done in photoshop
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i know i did that on purpose. and yes someone said that already ^^
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You should do it. I know you're gonna win anyways. :B
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wow this is awesome! its incredible! love their expressions! btw its gonna not gunna..unless you just say it that way!
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haha dang! i wanted one of those thingies!
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lol oh noes don't SD! don't let temptation control you! XD
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maaaaaaaaaaaaaaybe <.<
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I like the facial expressions :3 I like Pureheart's expression in the second panel~ :] Your really good at them
Sorrys but spelling errors
'there's no way your gunna win'
Isn't gunna supposed to be gonna? ( or 'your going to' )
And after 'This is why your poor' should end with a period and "your" is supposed to be 'you're.
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well i made the gunna like that on purpose. but as for the other two i'll fix those. wow i made lots of typo's in this page 
so what character shall i do
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If its okay, the character in my icon ^__^
Here is another pic : [link]
(there are stars on both cheeks)
Name is Staru btw :3 Good luck~ ;]
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LOL!!! XD
I like the part that Middy poke her and Sworddancer misses with funny face expression.
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ah my bad k what character should i do?
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'Not seriously not thinking' XDD;
There's an error~
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k then you got two, so name another character for me to do
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"hate's" shold be just "hates" owo
*wags tal* and now I want to join the raffle! ^^
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ok what character shall i do ^^
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[link]
This one now owo!! *hugs*
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Oh! and "not seriously not thinking"... extra "not" ^^
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someone else said that already
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check the post time.. I did it 4 hours before. XD
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oh heh well i already said she could have it
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I know ^w^ is ok, just making my poin, she can have it *nodnod* I'm not THAT greedy!
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XD uh oh... wonder whats gonna happen next o_o but 
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