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OrionsOuterLimits — A Tale To Astonish Final Chapter 85

Published: 2018-07-23 03:33:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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Description Amber brought the sword down, when Clara suddenly caught the blade in her bare hand.

"What?" Amber exclaimed. Clara stood up, facing Amber.

"What's funny is, that word... loser," Clara said, she clenched her hand around the blade bending the blade as her expression changed. "You don't even know the meaning of the word, lose. I flunked out of college, I was deemed a failure by my teachers and my dad. I lost my virginity to a street punk asshole, I was deemed a whore by my friends. I lost my friends, I was deemed a pathetic loser. Don't you dare compare losing a fight, to losing at life." She then punched Amber in the face, resulting in a great thunderclap. Amber was launched across the room and into a wall, cracking the surface. Dropping to the ground.
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FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 03:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Behind The Scenes 

Mi Chin: yes Welcome To The Jungle 

the steel started its attack!

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 03:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Clara (takes a deep breath, then www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zi-PuY… )

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 03:59:16 +0000 UTC]

The Steel Man began to shake as it was pushed back

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:06:52 +0000 UTC]

Clara: What's wrong? Steel Man can't handle the Metal.

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:07:47 +0000 UTC]

It tried to deliver a few last strikes

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Clara: Well then Steel Man. Meet Iron Man. (starts playing www.youtube.com/watch?v=2sWn3w…

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:14:50 +0000 UTC]

The Steel Man started to crack

Chao Yu: this is Awesome!!!!!

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Clara: Now then, for the last piece. A special request... (turns around) for my friend, Su Li. 

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Su Li: (watching from afar) oh boy she see’s me!

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Clara: Well don't be shy. (raises her guitar high) Let's hear a request. What'll it be.

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:27:03 +0000 UTC]

Mi Chin: yes Su what’ll it be?

Su Li: Son Of a Bitch (takes out a megaphone) Dragonforce Through The Fire And Flames!!!!!

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Clara: You got it. (Winks, before turning around www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zk6KVR… )

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:31:50 +0000 UTC]

In that moment the Steel Man shatters To pieces and the ladies cheer her on clapping

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Clara (wipes her forehead, turning around to Chin): Now, for the encore. What'll it be, Sifu. 

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:34:58 +0000 UTC]

Mi Chin: hmmm Woman No Cry by Bob Marley!

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:36:40 +0000 UTC]

Clara: A ballad, fitting. (sighs then www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXK6Tk… )

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Mi Chin: (sheds a few tears) so sweet!

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Clara (sighs again, wiping a hand across her eye, as the guitar disappeared): Thank you. (Bows, before dropping to the dirt)

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Ting Ting: (catches her)

Su Li: (leaps to ground) well done girl you’ve mastered Guitar Fu now I’ve got a surprise for you!

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Clara: Come to my show, and you'll see what I can really do.

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Su Li: Cool now you do you wanna see your surprise?

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:52:17 +0000 UTC]

Clara: Sure. (stands up straight) Surprise me!

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 04:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Su Li: follows me (walks back to the house)

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 04:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Clara: Whoa, slow down there. At least buy me dinner first. (chuckles) Sorry. (follows)

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 05:01:13 +0000 UTC]

Su Li: (goes inside the house and waits in a dark room)

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 05:03:47 +0000 UTC]

Clara: Oh, oh, very funny. You want me to count to ten.

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 05:05:16 +0000 UTC]

Su Li: (lights the candles of a guitar shaped cake with red and white frosting with the writing Congratulations)

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 05:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Clara (stops dead in her tracks, her mouth hanging open): I... (she closed her mouth, and managed to walk toward the cake, hanging her head) You... didn't have to.

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 05:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Su Li: (gives her a hug) I wanted to!

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 05:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Clara (sniffs, and wipes her hand across her eye): No... I. (she then slowly sat down) Its too much.

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 05:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Su Li: (sits next to her) what do you mean?

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 05:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Clara: It's just like with him... my dad. He was weird, he loved music like me, but he was never too keen on the idea of me going out there and playing. Said I needed a real job. (sighs) Anyway, my first show I asked him to come, he said he'd try to make it. I never saw him at the show.

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 05:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Su Li: sigh I understand!

(I thought about bringing Clara’s father into the picture but I didn’t want to do that with out your say so I just feel he needs to know about her because no child should be without there father believe me I know )

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 05:56:22 +0000 UTC]

(Well, she has her father, its her mother she never new.)

Clara: It hurt, and I hated him so much. I didn't speak to him when I got home. He then walked up to me and dared to hug me. I wanted to slap him so bad, he then told me to close my eyes. When I opened them, there he was standing there, smiling, holding a small box. He handed it to me and told me to open it. (she then held out her locket) It was this. Said to me, "Gratulationes angelus meus." Put he put it around me neck telling me how proud he was of me. It was then I learned that he did come to my show, he just hung in the back. Said he didn't want me to feel the pressure of him watching. I finally broke, crying there in his arms. I felt so foolish for hating him. He always worked so hard everyday, two jobs, and he still found the time to come. And there I was, angry because he didn't come to the front row.

(Yeah, she just has one of those, yeah her father is tough or down at times, but at the same time Clara secretly knew that he loved her. One of those relationships)

(translation: Congratulations my little angel.)

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 06:01:36 +0000 UTC]

( dammit I wanna cry)

Su Li: (tearing up)

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OrionsOuterLimits In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-07-23 06:17:32 +0000 UTC]

(Yeah, once again Clara is definitely one of my best and favorite characters. I just put so much work into her character. I had so many tragic characters that were villains, Lilith, Piper, Calamity, even Viper and Talia were villains for a time. Clara is one of my tragic heroes, she's had so much shit in her life, and could've very well gone down the wrong path. But she proved herself to be a hero.)

Clara (slowly rests her arm around Su Li): Thank you.    

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FabledHeroes In reply to OrionsOuterLimits [2018-07-23 06:19:49 +0000 UTC]

( that she did)

Su Li: your so damn welcome now let’s eat this damn brownie cookie before I cry anymore!

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