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Published: 2011-10-22 20:55:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 340; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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I canremember an eager tongue
and
watching glittering
eyes indulge foolishness.
That night the sky was our only
witness
to the simplest of love's crimes.
You swore on the stars
I see
holes in the sky.
Pouring out their cheap love drunken lines,
and
where I live,
we swim in deception.
No matter what you said,
I was left
below your heaven.
and I was left
with only enough to
hang defeat
on the head
of a solemn grave.
Where I was sure to
land
white flag in
hand, denying intentions
to ever love
again.
Now
we know,
that meanings are only words,
and lies
are hard to quit.
I could starve myself
from you,
if I wasn't so desperate
to feel alive.
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Comments: 11
JJ-Lit [2012-04-02 17:34:16 +0000 UTC]
I have to say while the that whole poem is great, the lines below are pretty much off the charts, bravo
"meanings are only words,
and lies
are hard to quit"
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BeyondJen [2012-02-03 01:40:03 +0000 UTC]
I can't believe I missed this before. My dear, it seems you are a master of collabs. I like this a lot.
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creaking-door [2011-11-12 11:45:12 +0000 UTC]
A silken marriage of words produced an offspring of love's drama. An enjoyable piece.
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FuzzyHoser [2011-11-01 16:57:29 +0000 UTC]
Oooh...you two write awesome together! I love this, perfect cohesion.
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IgnitionInStars In reply to sammyfraz [2011-10-23 16:22:53 +0000 UTC]
i'll write something worthy of faving.
soon
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IgnitionInStars In reply to sammyfraz [2011-10-24 17:11:12 +0000 UTC]
and the help of the irish and pots of gold
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