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This is a stunning glamour image. Because it is a glamour shot, I would do some digital retouching on her arms and chest. It appears as if she has a light rash which distracts from the beauty of the image. I'm not sure if you retouched her face but the area under her lips looks blotchy. I think that if you had brought her left hand into the shot it would add to the overall sensuality of the image. As it is, it looks somewhat severed. Again, I was stopped in my tracks by this image. The head alone is breathtaking!
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On this silky soft photo it is visible, that you like natural light and you can use it well! Your model fits perfectly into this bright environment, and this gives the photo a plus, from what it is eye-catching. It is visible that your communication with the model was good enough, because she is relaxed and follows your setting well. On the other hand I would like to give you an advice, which could affect your future shots positively. Try to shoot your photos a little wider, I mean go a little further from your model, and this way the frame of the photo will not be so narrow. Under narrowness I mean cutting the hair, hand and knee, which is just detail fault and is not the most important, however if you will avoid these your photos will look much better. Furthermore another fault, from my subjective opinion, is the leg in the background, because it attracts attention a little. I hope that my critique was not offensive, I tried to be constructive. To sum up this is a nice photo and you are a talented photographer. I wish you good lights and stunning models!
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thanks for the great critique
the framing as such was my wish, but of course, it's just my personal taste... being a matter of taste, indeed can be different
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I am breathless! too much incredible good looking girls! nice good made pics! thanks
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Belle image ! Bon travail ! FΓ©licitations !
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she is like Marilyn Monroe reborn~!?!?!?!?!
kewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwl! aloha ~KENNEY
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this one reminds me of marilyn monroe gorgeous!
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I think that your Critiquers pretty much have it right. She is extremely easy to look at.
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she should be on a coin. great rep for mutha russ.............
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great face - I like the pensive look she has
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lots of advice below, i'm just going to say WOW
awesome model and beautiful pic, well done!
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Marilyn, eat your heart out! Very soft and beautiful.
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