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Published: 2008-10-20 13:35:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 241; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description there was a moment before the
     lift
where the flame pressed down
as if the oil above me, alit and alive
boiled the water and myself
below

and feeling, if you could call it that
slowly slithered down my sides and crawled out
my fingertips
     to drag its belly across the ground where
i couldn't see

i broke
through cellophane, melting
through a tasteless surface, my feet
leaving the ground
my gravity
leaving the rules behind
ringed in halos, i was glowing and
bold and
bleeding,
     stretched thick against the
cool, supposed to be cold, wind from the edge of the garden

and guiltless, i hung
my doings undone until i reached the
ground again
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Comments: 7

seeyouontuesday [2008-10-23 13:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Hrm. I like this poem, but the thing I really want to comment about is how in-depth this picture and poem made me want to go. I just spent about an hour researching resurrection suspensions.

They're really interesting...but I don't really understand the point of them. Is it supposed to induce an out-of-body experience, or something along those lines?

Rawrgh. =/

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gutterbreed In reply to seeyouontuesday [2008-10-24 01:13:23 +0000 UTC]

it's different for everybody, really.
your body gets to a point where it releases so many endorphins that, once you're off the ground, there is no pain. and from there it's anybody's guess. for me, it feels like meditation. it's the most tranquil place to be. some of my friends feel like they're higher than they could ever be on any drug. some of my friends just feel happy and mellow and relaxed.

i'm glad you looked it up - it makes me happy when people research stuff instead of just wondering

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seeyouontuesday In reply to gutterbreed [2008-10-24 15:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh...that makes more sense that what I'd thought. o.-*

So it induces euphoria from a natural reaction? Interesting. Better than drugs, I guess.

I'm glad I looked it up, too! Yeah, I can't stand not knowing about stuff. It's a pet peeve of mine. [link]

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OceaNova-Techno [2008-10-20 19:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Loverly! I really like the second and last stanza, they pop out for me for some reason. The one thing that caught me off guard I guess was the end of the third stanza, "cool, supposed to be cold, wind..." Those commas kind of break up the flow for me, and it seems not as poetic as the rest. But you know me, I hardly know anything about the pen and paper, but just in case you wondered I love you miggles

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gutterbreed In reply to OceaNova-Techno [2008-10-21 08:06:38 +0000 UTC]

since when have you started calling me miggles?

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OceaNova-Techno In reply to gutterbreed [2008-10-21 15:16:49 +0000 UTC]

I really don't know. I had a dream.

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gutterbreed In reply to OceaNova-Techno [2008-10-22 08:51:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah, well, i had a dreamsicle. but it melted.

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