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Published: 2007-04-23 11:37:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 286; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description I had a cat hair on my tongue, replaced it
With cookie crumbs
To them, I was Everest, those little
Yarn chasers, those little clambering
Mewers of protest and conquest and everything in between

The purring
Went straight through my chest, straight through
The cords of muscle and through the air
I had just sucked between my teeth
Past my spine and down into the foundations of the house
The crust, mantle, core of the earth
While I tasted chocolate chips, some child in China
Heard the kitten
And his contentment

There was a bad movie on –
We weren’t watching it
We were watching somersaults, spidersilk thuds in tiny chests
Tidbits of a cookie shipwreck floating on the tops of milk in
Spiraled, chipped glasses
I slid my hand beneath
A soft belly, lifted her to my face
Fur on my lips, tongue on my nose – she smelled new, warm
She twisted and fell
The pads of her paws magnetized to
A hardwood floor
Scampered under the lockjaw fortress of
The armoire

You had half a cookie in your mouth
So I kissed your forehead instead
And watched while one of them
Attacked the end of your pencil, and I asked,
“What are you writing ‘bout?”

“Kittens and cookies.”
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Comments: 9

NousNonPlus [2007-08-19 20:06:00 +0000 UTC]

I remember watching all of this happen just last week.

I love the strong sense of nostalgia your poems are comprised of. It's always very calming to read.
I know you've heard it all before, but you're amazin', woman.

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gutterbreed In reply to NousNonPlus [2007-09-11 02:15:06 +0000 UTC]

nostalgia is one of the most surreal and fundamental feelings of life. glad i could grasp it, even if for a second.

how's college?

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NousNonPlus In reply to gutterbreed [2007-09-11 04:49:31 +0000 UTC]

It's alright. I am getting more homesick than I anticipated, though.

I'm just going to make sure I visit a lot.

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Nimbus9 [2007-05-02 13:04:41 +0000 UTC]

I agree..god who can make a cat poem fresh...you can!

I was just all proud of myself, of a poem I just wrote, then I read you! Damn you, you're briming over with talent You better use it girl! Hear me!

Anyway, all the best. I haven't been around much lately, hope your having a great time, and all is well.

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gutterbreed In reply to Nimbus9 [2007-09-11 02:14:26 +0000 UTC]

i love hearing from you, you spur me forward in my love for writing by giving me the confidence that occasionally fades. thank you

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GeldTheNudist [2007-04-25 04:32:10 +0000 UTC]

you just made the worst topic [EVER!] good reading material.
i have nothing to add on to this... although i'm tempted to take a shot at it too.

i'm still astounded... nice one!

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gutterbreed In reply to GeldTheNudist [2007-09-11 02:13:54 +0000 UTC]

please, if you can, tweak around with it - i'd love to see what you could come up with

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wukurd [2007-04-24 04:03:18 +0000 UTC]

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gutterbreed In reply to wukurd [2007-09-11 02:13:27 +0000 UTC]

achoo!

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