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Published: 2006-01-05 03:59:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 265; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 20
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Do I strike your fancy, do IMake your tongue and cheek
Meet the barbell to your teeth
As you cross some sanguine swan song, it's
Pallid like the dance floor
So honey, would you like more, would you
Come home with me?
And you say there's nothing to it
Like I need some knock-kneed tutor
With a twisted sense of humour, oh
I'll bend it like you never knew
My sheets are made of icing, folds like
Lacquer wedding dresses
Gothic gowns and gothic tresses
With gold inlaid filligree
Against the red inside of me
Call me darling, little masochist, so come and get it
'S hard to miss
Ballroom music to the bedroom,
Bet you never saw it coming, such a pretty, petty boy
Can't forget a face like yours
And it's caught in the reflection
Like some brutalized confection, oh you're
Sweeter than the wedding cake
My lilted wilted easy-bake
Some deviation I have stored in
Whetstones and their ringing scores
In gasping, halted lovers' breaths
That mark the tempo, as do their deaths
Till death do us part's the tactic
How antifuckingclimactic
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Comments: 14
gutterbreed In reply to ichigopop [2006-08-14 09:49:12 +0000 UTC]
wanna be breathless? try reading this all in three big breaths - well, four, counting the last part. it's kinda how it's supposed to sound but it makes me wheeze
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yekdorb [2006-02-01 07:46:39 +0000 UTC]
holy fuck.
your rhyming meter's irrelevant, it's your RYTHM that's so astounding. this feels like a pulse, like a ready-for-anything pulse that's beautifully overwhelming, drowns out anything else you might hear. . . .
i love your word choices. it feels like everything's so carefully chosen and placed, that i'm THEREβthe icing sheets, the easy-bake boy, it's so crisp.
antifuckingclimactic?
good god. . . .
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gutterbreed In reply to yekdorb [2006-02-02 01:19:36 +0000 UTC]
i'm dancing on clouds! i think you do that unknowingly (leaving artsy in-depth comments) but they always make me happy. that and your insistance on my reading rushdie, because i love it when people tell me to read things. it makes me all excited, like "ooh! this has to be good!" and then i get impatient to get my hands on whatever author and yadda yadda yadda.
basically what i'm trying to tell you is it's just like that when i see that you're left a comment. i can't wait to read it
you rock like a boulder!
random quotes from the shoutbox:
"i'm so getting a dog this summer"
"TODAY IS MY BIRTHDAY!!!!"
"mmm, bondage!"
see you soon
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gutterbreed In reply to Nimbus9 [2006-02-02 01:15:47 +0000 UTC]
multiply that by x number of whatevers and you might have the comparison between reading my work and reading yours. i'm in awe
thank you!
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gutterbreed In reply to OceaNova-Techno [2006-02-15 08:46:00 +0000 UTC]
no, no, i believe the ass is your department. i'm more of a tits and legs girl, and yes, census says i rock them
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gutterbreed In reply to Vexbeast [2006-01-07 11:22:38 +0000 UTC]
if it were ever to be made into a song, i'd want rasputina to do it
thank you for the fav, too
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gutterbreed In reply to wukurd [2006-01-07 07:38:57 +0000 UTC]
well, it falls into place somehow...i guess it depends on how you read it.
i particularily liked this out of most of what i've written, but it seems to be the least favorite of anybody else. lol!
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