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Published: 2005-10-09 09:50:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description space gives us a broad
untroubled forehead that looms gunmetal blue
above the tops of the trees we call our secret
conference hall
where we cry like the beasts
that leave daily footprints
on daily trails
through this backyard canyon

the sky is peppered,
they say,
with a more unnerving shade of
gunmetal

with your byzantine beliefs we've been left
to sink our feet into spaces
the earth left between the mud and the rain
as it sighed and
sagged and
took a load off for once
the pistol-tinted lions have
taken off from its shoulders
to trouble the brow above us
as we whisper below, the air-raid siren wails
like some unknown creature in
pre-mourning

your lips were painted purple and silver as
battle
slipped from between them
so i pointed my umbrella upward
like a firearm
and held the sky at gunpoint

napalm lit the ground at the back of my vision
and the back of my mind
as with a hop, skip and a jump
i stole a kiss from your
checkered lipstick
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Comments: 6

Nimbus9 [2006-04-14 15:06:48 +0000 UTC]

Another gem discovered, I love going treasuring hunting in here!

ith your byzantine beliefs we've been left
to sink our feet into spaces
the earth left between the mud and the rain
as it sighed and
sagged and

Man this just flows...there's a lot here. not least of all the strange play between sex and violence

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gutterbreed In reply to Nimbus9 [2006-04-18 07:01:33 +0000 UTC]

i'll be giving your gallery the dive soon too, when school lets up
thank you!

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francees [2005-10-10 02:21:32 +0000 UTC]

make love not war..... this is totally beautiful! and s.o.a.d rocks! <3<#<3

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gutterbreed In reply to francees [2005-10-10 07:35:42 +0000 UTC]

heehee, they do. and thank you!

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madeyoucry [2005-10-09 16:37:52 +0000 UTC]

neato! system of a down is awesome, rock on!

i like the beginning of the poem best...how imaginative, the sky is a forehead. but i guess you didn't really intend to unify the poem with a theme so i won't comment on the lack thereof

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gutterbreed In reply to madeyoucry [2005-10-09 20:27:00 +0000 UTC]

actually, it's a little ditty of love and war. the system show made me start thinking about war (they always do!) so i decided to write about it.
thanks for the input

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