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Published: 2006-02-28 09:07:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Today is filled with tin-can symphoniesRoller coaster heartbeats
And construction paper revolvers.
My eyes locked on freckled glass
Floor boards soaking up my feeble breaths
Tomorrow promises rain,
And I wait under the skylight until the clouds awaken
Mind lost in late night conversations
…Rewound and replayed
I think I left my heart under his leopard print bedspread
.And it’s still waiting there to be found.
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haha. yeah. definitely not as cool. that's my favorite part of the poem too i think. thanks a lot for the comment!
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Another good poem.
Heavily emotive atmosphere. Perhaps, too heavily emotive. It creates a sort of emotional confusion, perhaps this was intentional, good work though.
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