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Published: 2006-02-28 09:11:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I’d like to see you come undone.With frown lines and disregard,
Forest-fires in your eyes.
The mannequins are tired of you stealing their smiles
(While all I dream about Is suicide)
How is it that passion pours through veins
Joy lights up faces
Hope cures diseases,
And I am still sick on a bathroom floor.
(in a place that is not home)
I want to be there when you break down.
Your constant perfection like a slap in the face
Vision blurred through black eyes
(my soul declined)
Pour your blood onto paper and send it in an envelope addressed to the lost -
I’ve been waiting.
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Comments: 5
EbonDawn [2006-02-28 19:53:42 +0000 UTC]
You're really good at those strong, nearly impassive endings.
A very strong piece, with a clever statement. The only way to reach someone is to relate through thier feelings. Any feelings.
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ghostsofyou In reply to EbonDawn [2006-02-28 23:52:55 +0000 UTC]
yes! you didn't find anything wrong with this one! no, i'm joking. i love your insight and suggestions on improvement. thankyouuu.
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EbonDawn In reply to ghostsofyou [2006-03-01 15:19:05 +0000 UTC]
lol sorry, you know what they say... well... I say "A good poet never stops improving"
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