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DragonAT — First Blood 5
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Published: 2012-04-25 22:52:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 8466; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 189
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Erica finally tore the blade out, ripping the woman's throat in half. A gurgling soon filled her lips as her lungs began to fill with the incredible amount of blood now escaping her. Her face relaxed, eyes rolling back and mouth open in a silent scream, as she began to expire at a much quicker rate. Blood now began to pour down her armour, clinging to her fabric and sliding off her metal. Her spark was about to be snuffed out...I know the blood effects aren't the best; hopefully I'll gain more experience and get better at it
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Comments: 9
Love the design on your suits & helmet, especially when we can we the expression of the characters in through the translucent mouth guard and visor! Hope there'll be more rendering of this?!
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Thank you very much! Glad you enjoy it!
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The description really helps make it. I really enjoyed it
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The ONLY thing I don't like about this pic is the groin-guard. The sentry's eyes and her reflexive gesticulations are the best part. The expressive caption does much to juice this juicy pic. Other than the groin-guard, I LOVE the uniform, helmet and all.
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You, I like you.
The groin guard was added as an aside to make it look a bit more loin-clothy. Seems to be a bit more feminine, but it might be a bit unpractical, seeing as how it might trip them up.
Thank you very much for the feedback! Very much appreciate any tips given to me. Over Christmas I'll try to finish the story (another soldier to neutralize) and perhaps get out a special render of a loin-less armour
Thanks again for the feedback! If you have anymore to give, feel free to comment on any of my works
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