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A Poorly Executed Raid — Description
Four girls got into position, ready to attack the target. His guards had all been accounted for and their patrol routes established. It should have gone smoothly...

Abigail Raysa snickered at the thought of an easy payday. She would be putting it towards a new convertible she had her eye on, a red number with an amazing engine. She could hear the air whistling through her pigtails as she whizzed done the highway at top speed, not giving a single shit about cops or authorities. She was snapped out of her thoughts by her team leader, Anna Jackson. "All go. Target is approaching." The newbie and most inexperienced one, Greta Tomak, began to breath heavily as she started to worry. She had never experienced something like this before and the stress of the raid began to take a toll on her.

Being inexperienced, Greta did not realize that shooting the first guard that rounded the corner was a very good way of making things go disastrously wrong. As they had a target and the guards were not their target, everyone had just assumed the target would be the one to aim at first. Unfortunately, Greta was not the sharpest of Orion Solutions soldiers and opened fire as soon as the first guard rounded the corner. She missed of course, since she was extremely inexperienced and shaking, and the guards fell back.

"Greta what the fuck did you d-" Anna started before being cutoff by a sharp blast to her gut. She took 4 rounds, completely destroying her insides and she let out a bloodcurling scream and moaned as she fell over writhing. She curled up into the fetal position before expiring. The panic and failure of the moment seized all the girls and they were all frozen for a few seconds. Abigail was hit next, a blast tearing across her chest and taking the wind out of her. She fell back, dead before she hit the ground. Renee Champaigne, the fourth member of the squad, was hit in the chest but no vitals were hit. She fell to the ground in pain and moaned loudly as she writhed around. As fate would have it, Greta, the one who caused the disaster, was the last hit. She caught a round in her throat, and blood gurgle from her mouth. She wasn't even able to scream as she clutched at her bleeding neck. With the rest of the squad dead, the guards came up to Renee, the last living member. One guard pulled his pistol and placed a round through her skull, ending her suffering. The raiders' bodies were rounded up and taking away for identification and search...

The story doesn't match the one I did earlier for Raysa. I modified it slightly. Image is still the same though