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WaterCool, clear, calm.
Surprisingly cool,
Like glass
Shaped by tiny whispers
Soft on the breeze.
"Rise up," one calls,
Echoed by the others.
Another cries, "Stand tall!"
And they all agree.
But the wind blows past,
The voices fade,
And the water settles
Cool, clear, calm.
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Comments: 2
skyebluedream [2004-02-23 13:17:05 +0000 UTC]
Its sort of limmerickish, no? I like it, the way it ties itself off.
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devilspawn In reply to skyebluedream [2004-02-24 22:58:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah One of the few times I've been able to do that. VERY few. heh
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