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daniel-andrei — Forgotten Earth
Published: 2010-07-10 21:41:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 3925; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 246
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Sorry about the lack of deviations recently. Have been on vacation, and I don't know, this is what I've come up with.Update: revisited.
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Foarte foarte frumos, amazed. Ai sincerele mele felicitari, si fav ;*.
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To work with negative space is something that's always hard, no matter what platform you work in.
Here I don't think you've pulled it off as good. It's not much that draws the eye here besides the upper left corner due to it's the bright spot. I do realise the title is "Forgotten Earth" but I don't think it means you shouldn't see it.
I think you need better light on the planet as well as a couple more stars to keep it a bit more interesting and to have something to rest the eye on. Now it's a bit too naked I think for it to work properly.
/rob
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Noticed your feedback long ago, I finally fixed it, I don't know if it's much, but I do know it's better. Thank you!
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Yes, I started this a while ago, and finished it yesterday, modified few things and added font, I didn't think it matches either but eh.
Thank you for your feedback ! Apreciated ^^.
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