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Captainfusion — Catching fish
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Published: 2011-03-15 08:50:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 971; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 42
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A concept of mine- if you think you can stomach it, I made an ugly comic with this:[link]
Critique is much appreciated!
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Comments: 9
Thank you! I hate doing water.
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Wow, there are so many things I love about this piece! First of all, great composition! There's such good balance in the color scheme.
There are some things that look a little bit off compared with the rest of the picture, though. The little red box seems to have a different light source and it draws a lot of attention to it. Also, the trees are the only thing that look like they don't have a tiny outline, which makes them look a little bit too separated from the rest of the picture. The rocks and water, though, flow so well with the rest! 
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Thank you very much for the great feedback. I have been told about the trees, so you are not the only one who thinks that. I also see what you mean about the box. I recently learned a new trick to help prevent that in the future. I appreciate the feedback, thanks!
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Yes, well thank you! I thought I had taken into account the rule of the thirds, not that I use all four corners, but I use some of them. I don't understand what it has to do with the trees though. I see I should maybe have spend more time on the trees and the general background. There is a lot of small things about this piece, I just end up not seeing it. 
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Thank you, the waster was odd to work with but I think I made it look liquid enough.
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