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basicthuganomics — Nothing is real
Published: 2010-08-28 01:36:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 251; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Dream up a princeWhat is his name
What is he like
What does he say
Does he show charm
And give love to you
Keep dreaming girl
He may just come true
Just prance around in nowhere land
Where life is good and all is grand
How do you feel, when nothing is real
And skip along the smiling sun
The days are long and you're still young
How does it feel, when nothing is real
Run to your room
Write up a sonnet
Is it romantic
Place your heart on it
Does it sooth you
Back to that place
Too bad it's just words
And you're just a face
Just dance around in la la land
Where you are queen and all is grand
How do you feel, when nothing is real
And waltz around the smiling sun
The dream is long and you're still young
How does it feel, when nothing is real
Lay in your bed
Cry out your eyes
Substance was needed
To help you get by
But you've taken too many
Now your hearts in a frenzy
The dream's a reality
Is that what you envied
Just lie around in someone's land
Your life is gone and all is grand
How do you feel, when nothing is real
And melt along the smiling sun
Keep dreaming on like you're still young
How does it feel, when nothing is real
Something is real
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Comments: 6
This is amazing! The imagery that it evokes is excellent, and I really like the way that you blend the two points of view in the end, even if it isn't in a way that was expected at the beginning of the song. The only critique that I have is that I'm having difficulty trying to find a tune that would fit with the mixture of both long and short stanzas that you have interchanging in here. But if you have a tune, I would really love to hear this one played out. I really do love this song, you did an awesome job! (and sorry I fail at getting back to you sooner, but I haven't been able to get online until just now 
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Thanks :3 I think about a line or 2 in the 2nd and 3rd verse are kinda needing a trim. I think after every line I would want a pop pop from a snare drume, and then the chorus would flow a little harder. Anyways once I run into Mark again, he told me he wanted to help make the music and place a bridge in it too.
No worries on getting back buddy, im glad you like it!!
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OMG I love you! lol did you understand it? Thanks so much for faving it luv, means alot. I put some time, thought, and anger into it :3 thanks again for the fave Momo!! <3
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i think i did. Either way the lyrics were beautiful and we're BFFs! Of coarse i'm gonna fave your stuff!
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