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sureya — maria... chapter 01... draft
Published: 2011-07-02 12:22:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 6635; Favourites: 103; Downloads: 67
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the draft to a new comic idea... i don't know when i will be able to work on it but i made this drafts so that i don't 4get it...chapter 02...
until i come up with a better title... this comic will b called simply as maria... it's a romantic comedy love/life shoujo manga... this is the 1st chapter... each chapter contains 8 pages...
u know how in most shoujo manga the main character (girl) r usually this sweet naive plain looking girl with low self esteem... well... my girl (maria) is the most stubborn overbearing hot tempered & outspoken girl u'll ever c as a main character... she's cold & emotionless most of the time but she's quite the scheming type... a free spirit she never lets anyone or anything stands in her way...
while the only person that can keep up with her is her life long first love... luigi ( yeah... i know... seem familar... XP ) who is the most patient & sweet ( & a lil' dense...) boyfriend in the world... maria would always pull tantrums & make life hell 4 normal boyfriends but it's not a problem 4 him...
anyway... please read it & tell me what u think about it... ( i hope u can decipher those spaghetti thingi that is my handwriting...) and 4give me 4 any grammatical or spelling mistakes... this comic is actually meant 2 b in malay... i just wrote in english so that everyone can read it... ^^
okay... each page is doodled in about 15 minutes... with mechanical pencil 2B lead... color edited in photoshop...
this is an original manga created by me... please do not use or copy it...
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thanx... it's still in the earliest stages of development but i hope 2 make it in2 a fully fledged series in the future...
i wish i could read more than malay & english... so many mangas that i missed out because of this...
glad u like it... i'll b posting the continuation as soon as possible... ^^
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Oh thank you. I agree with your dream to be a manga artist/creator too. I want to be one as well, but I'm still improving my art to better my career. If I can't be one tho, then I'll be a writer. Either way I get to do what I wish to be, just one of them doesn't have my other hobby involved.
I want read Japanese, as well. So much things missed...makes me want everyone to have the same language sometimes. But that would be no fun...
Keep up the good work and I LOVE Sailor Moon!!! Who's your fav character?
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I like it! hehee your charictors are cute as always. ^__^
But I like the panel layout and how it flows too.
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glad 2 hear that... because it's 1 of my main weaknesses...
i still need 2 work more on my movements & perspective though... also among my biggest weaknesses...
thanx 4 liking this...^^
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"1 of my main weaknesses... "?
Sorry don't see it.
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haha... have u seen my old comic pages...? crazy panels...
my editor used 2 complain about them all the time...
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looks at your older posts....
well I guess a few are a little awkward.
still thay're better than the souless
Block, Block, Block, Block.......
I've seen some people use.
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haha... i have learned 2 'tame' my panels a bit... they were too wild & crazy 2 comprehend...
i don't like panels that r too well arranged... & block by block as u said... they r boring...
but too crazy is not good too... so i need 2 b somewhere in the middle... not too boring... but not too crazy... ^^
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i still need 2 learn more on comic drawing... but i'm glad u like it... ^^
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This is really good! I like it! I would like to read more of it 
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more chapters will b coming soon... ^^
thanx...
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Yay! You're very welcome ^^
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thanx... glad that u do... ^^
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i like it. hard to read in some parts but the story seams interesting.
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your story rlly impressive xD It makes me curious about what going to happen next =3 ♥ Great job >.<
ah plz write carefully plz :-s I hardly see the writin' ~~~
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Love Itt !!!! But Awhhhh 
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