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sureya — maria... chapter 01... draft
Published: 2011-07-02 12:22:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 6599; Favourites: 103; Downloads: 67
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the draft to a new comic idea... i don't know when i will be able to work on it but i made this drafts so that i don't 4get it...chapter 02...
until i come up with a better title... this comic will b called simply as maria... it's a romantic comedy love/life shoujo manga... this is the 1st chapter... each chapter contains 8 pages...
u know how in most shoujo manga the main character (girl) r usually this sweet naive plain looking girl with low self esteem... well... my girl (maria) is the most stubborn overbearing hot tempered & outspoken girl u'll ever c as a main character... she's cold & emotionless most of the time but she's quite the scheming type... a free spirit she never lets anyone or anything stands in her way...
while the only person that can keep up with her is her life long first love... luigi ( yeah... i know... seem familar... XP ) who is the most patient & sweet ( & a lil' dense...) boyfriend in the world... maria would always pull tantrums & make life hell 4 normal boyfriends but it's not a problem 4 him...
anyway... please read it & tell me what u think about it... ( i hope u can decipher those spaghetti thingi that is my handwriting...) and 4give me 4 any grammatical or spelling mistakes... this comic is actually meant 2 b in malay... i just wrote in english so that everyone can read it... ^^
okay... each page is doodled in about 15 minutes... with mechanical pencil 2B lead... color edited in photoshop...
this is an original manga created by me... please do not use or copy it...
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sugoi~
tapi mata besa sangat...
gahahahaha... tak suke mata besak besak...
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yaaay~!! maria mercedes~ lalalala~
tetiba teringat lagu maria mercedes tehee
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My god...that is so good!! The drawings are so awesome, I envy your comic skills.
The story is really good too, I like the character Maria. Very interesting and real
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lol Be my girlfriend for CANDY!!!!
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Interesting idea! I would like to know what's going to happen next
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i'm almost done with chapter 2... will post it as soon as possible...
thanx... ^^
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well... i will keep drafting them whenever i have some free time...
but i'm not really sure when can i really work on it though...
thanx...
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I think it's great!
I just had a hard time reading some of the words what didn't scan in correctly. ^.^
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glad u think so...
sorry about that, it's a draft so some of the pencil lines r lighter than the rest...
mayb i'll post in better images when i have the chance to work on this... for now i just like to know what people think of the story and concept...
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XD That's fine~ And I would love to see how the story turns out!
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ehehe... chapter 2 is almost done...
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cool! I'm excited if you post it~
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seems interesting! I think it could have some real potential and would like to see more. ^ ^ Also I'm sure if you wanted to post finished versions in English you could find someone to edit your grammar. ^ ^
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great then... i am in the process of drafting out more chapters... i'll post them out later...
haha... it would be great if someone could do that for me... i know my english is not that great...
thanx... ^^
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Actually, you're english is really good, it's just got a few little errors here and there, mostly the wrong, but similar, word used here or there. But you can still tell exactly what you mean. English can be such a pain in the butt!
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i rarely get 2 use it outside of DA... so my english is a bit rusty at the moment...
i need 2 read more...
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I hope to see a full story of yours one day! Have you ever planned on posting one here? or turnning one over in english and selling it? ^.^
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well... it is meant 4 publications... when i finish it i will propose it 2 me editor... if he likes it then it will b published...
the company i work 4 do publish some comics in english...
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cool! I just wanna read one of your one day
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looks really interesting!
I love the character Luigi, he is so adorable! and I also love the fact that you've used a completely non-stereotypical main character :3
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ehehehe... i read a lot of shoujo mangas & i get kinda tired of the normal stereotype characters.... it's always the good girl & the bad guy...
so now i made a not-so-good girl & a totally seemingly-innocent guy... but they have some unexpected sides to them too... ^^
thanx... ^^
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ah it sounds great! can't wait to see more :3
no problem ^^
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it's very hard to read the text, can you place a digital ones please? i can't read them..
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sorry about that... they r 15 minutes doodles so they tend 2 b messy... & i dont' have the time 2 put digital text...
mayb i will post the finished version here... then i will place the text digitally... ^^
thanx...
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well, i didnt mean i cannot read them totally, just some words are unreadable because they are almost white
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I like it! It totally drew me in. Can't wait for the next one!
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thanx 4 reading... the handwriting must've been hard 2 read... but i didn't have the time 2 put digital text... gomen-ne...
i'll try & write better in the next chapter...
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Looks like the beginning of a great story! Keep it up! I look forward to reading more!
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owh...i do intend 2 post more chapters... in order 2 find out what readers think about them...
i don't know when will i b able 2 work on it though... but thanx 4 reading it... ^^
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That's ok! You get to it when you can. I'll still read it whether you post more in a day or a month
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oh, I like the storyline and Maria really brings a fresh wind into all the stereotyped shojo characters, I like her
And to me your handwriting is easy to read and your english is not bad at all, I couldn't find any irritating mistakes ^-^
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yeah... good lil' girls falling 4 bad guys r starting 2 get a lil' boring... so i made my girl more on the bad side... she not actually that bad but that's for a different chapter... XD
haha... can't help it... doodled them in about 15 minutes & the handwriting is the least fave part 2 do... we artists can draw for hours but we can't stand writing even for a few minutes...
probably will make some changes 2 the sentences when later when i really work on this... ^^
thanx...
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Aw. It seems like one of those stories that she doesn't really like Luigi at first and goes out with a different guy, but then at the end she decides she actually loves Luigi? Idk. Lol
Anyway, it's a really cute story. <3
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well... almost... but i put some twists along the way...
thanx...glad u like it...
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neat idea the words are kinda hard to read but its just a draft the drawings look awesome
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haha...sorry about that... but likeu said it is just the draft...
mayb i'll post in the finished pages when i have the chance 2 really work on it... ^^
thanx...
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your welcome, that would be neat the story looks really interesting
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Oooooh i hope you make more! I love reading this! Its a brilliant idea and i hope you continue to make them! Makes me super happy! <3
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well... i do intend to make more chapters... glad that u like it so far...
thanx... ^^
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Heh...toyol tol la Luigi...eh...Luigi? Cam kenal je nama tu....ALAMAK!!!
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hahaha... saja je nak buat parody sket...
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I always love your works and I adore this one as well. I wish I lived in Malay as you say so I could get it, but sadly I can't read Malaysian...So I'll have to deal with it in sketch form but i do enjoy this. A different manga is always appreciated.
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