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7-31-09 - Quiet now, Little BirdI decided to re-do an older composition to get an idea of how my work has progressed. What do you think?
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It has a more dynamic feel to it as compared to your previous work. I have an issue with his right arm in general.
1. His right arm looks very tubular. Second comment should fix this.
2. Since it's a forced perspective it needs to taper more towards his shoulder. This should help fix the cylindrical I mentioned previously.
3. There isn't enough wrinkles where the shoulder meets the torso on the Joker's coat. With the amount of wrinkles on the torso portion of the coat the right arm seems artificial as if it doesn't belong there.
Aside from that it looks really good. I hope I didn't overdo it with the critique?
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