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Comic page WIP — Description
I am posting this for two reasons. One, to show that I am still actually trying to finish this thing and two to show how it is going (and ask for crits).

Of the six pages planned, this one needs the most work (mainly because I decided to change the layout: only the first panel is the same). Scribbles everywhere (though hopefully what is going on is clear). The faded red lines are the initial roughing out of the sequence I wanted to happen on this page. Green lines more refined and within proper panels. Dark blue is roughing out clothing in the couple of panels they are present.

Of the other pages:

Pg 2 - 44% done (backgrounds complete, characters missing in most panels)
Pg 3 & 4 - 90% done (just missing text)
Pg 5 - 80% done (just missing one main character)
Pg 6 - 50% done (background complete, still need main characters and text)

Yeah, still a lot of work to do.