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Published: 2002-08-25 14:25:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1416; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 85
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It's been a long time since I submitted a deviation..... this time I wanted to create something in 3D.Well this one's something like a starwars scene.....
I know I'm not that good at it.... 'cause I'm just a newbie at this......... I've never done such kinda' work before..... so it was my first attempt.
Well the textures for the ship were made in Photoshop, and the whole scene was created in Bryce......... So there u r .... hope u all like it.....
any comments on how it cud be improved are most welcome.....
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This is a great piece of work.
Don't know if you have read my journal entry, but this type of illustration is perfect for the cover of my new book. Sci-fi bok called ENEMY, and this artwork is virtually what I have writen about (Space station battle, etc) Would you be interested in creating something similar to this that I could use?
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Okay, some comments, cause i know how eager i was to get comments on my first submission .
-Background is very nice, but a bit blurry though. Could use a high res image.
-The fire seems like it was ripped out of a RTS-game, so that could use a bit of work though... But i know how hard it is to make realistic fire, so i doubt if i could get this far... Try to photoshop it, and maybe smudge it a bit...
-The model of the spaceship itself is a bit too simplistic to be realistic. Try to add some detail like: places where ships can dock and undock, a control tower, some weaponry, antennas, maybe some thrusters,... you get the picture i think.
-The texture: again it is very hard to get realistic textures, but here are some hints: Make it less monotone: all the rooms are lit, so make some of them dark. Only windows on the side of the torus, not on the topside. Don't apply the same texture on every part of your model. Create some new ones for the tunnels connecting the sphere and the torus. Like lit corridors or something. The same counts for the center sphere: make it a control tower or something...
-The scene itself: Give it a bit more action: like other meteors which are about to crash, spaceships flying in and out...
Don't let my comment get you down, try to use it to improve your model and keep on posting your improvements... Hey, this is how we all started in 3D-modelling . Keep up the good work!
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Thats pretty wicked mate! thought you were going say 3D studio Max for a minute there....nice to see that someones created a good 3D image without the use of Studio Max. Keep it up man!
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