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stygian still
Published: 2013-11-28 21:53:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 4598; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description never thought 'd be here still
the show seemed ending
time had moved on
...then it went on
I sighed the device (false endings a literary choice I've felt a flaw since Lord of the Rings)
yet we remain at the storytellers mercy, so I waited
 waited
this epilogue was inventive but repetitive and turned too mordant, the narrative had nothing left to say
til saying nothing seemed best
and thus   ........

too much silence though is hard edge to a wish for more
so recently I've searched again for subtle shifts and chance to change the arc
trying to shape words disjointed by neglect into dialog
keeping the shadows where the sun put them
wondering if this could be, might continuation redeem cause
time tried patience fed need to know, folly of a fool
to envision is a fear and a toll on the soul
yet I asked ...
x -invocation, supplication - need not repeated- x
and was answered
in clear cold light by slow revolution of evolution,
the universe turned and
-

I've not slept well since

we are here in now though
and you I am always grateful for
as to my scene to be   will what it will
for worth to try by due to all
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