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-So I have so many problems about this page and have REALLY been procrastinating putting it up.

I still don't think it's complete to the way I intended it to be, but not to make you guys wait any longer i decided to post it nonetheless.

-The thing that really killed me on this page is Shadow's eye which is supposed to be...different. Or at least showing that something is changing.

I can't tell you how many times I went back and back re-doing it over and over again lol!
It just didn't come out the way I imagined it at all but oh well it's guna have to suffice for now.

-Also, the dialogue for some reason really made me want to strangle myself, and also the speech bubbles are a little confusing.

Amy's shout over the first panel was supposed to be in a bubble but I couldn't make a bubble work without covering a good portion of that panel. Speech bubble placements for this page sucked!

-Alas despite all the mistakes in this page, I guess it came out not all that bad

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Not one to be caught in such a debilitating state, Shadow tries to brush off his pain, but with much difficulty as he's slowly collapsing.

Meanwhile, Amy's shouts of alarm are unknowingly catching the attention of nearby sets of ears.

She looks on in a state of panic, noticeably aware of Shadow's rapid change in demeanor and appearance before her eyes.

Something's not right...

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