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Checkmate (Part II)
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Published: 2019-05-29 07:59:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 25750; Favourites: 249; Downloads: 237
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Description   For a moment she was falling.  Hurtling towards an infinite blackness.

  The darkness felt strangely comforting, beckoning to her from a distance.  She couldn't hold out much longer.  She was tired... so, so tired.

  But just as she was about to surrender herself completely, Rook felt the last thing she would have ever expected: air.  Air that swirled throughout every inch of her broken body, filling her lungs.  Snap out of it, her mind screamed.  Fight back while you still can!

  But her body wouldn't respond.  Rook was only vaguely aware of her head, stilting motionless to the side, her arms still pinned in Bruiser's crushing embrace, her legs dangling several feet off the asphalt.  Suddenly the world shifted -- her left arm started to rise high above her head, held up by one of Bruiser's massive arms.  She was being held up like some sort of prize.  Her head lulled against her shoulder, her entire body swaying uselessly above the ground.

  "Uuuuunnnngggg."  It was all she could muster as Bruiser's laugh echoed through her eardrums.

  "Where's all that smart talk now, girlie?" Bruiser asked cruelly.

  In her peripheral vision, Rook noticed a few of the others had regained their wits, surrounding her in a circle.

  "Enjoy your asskicking, bitch?" one taunted.  "Doesn't feel so good when you're on the other end, huh?"

  "What the hell should we do with her?"

  "I say we do her right here in the street," another voice said.  "Teach this bitch a lesson."

  "Whadda say, girlie?" Bruiser whispered.  "You ready to show us a good time?"

  "No," a third voice said.  "You morons aren't gonna do anything to her, not until we take her to the Boss.  He'll decide what to do with her."

  "But--"

  "Now move your fucking asses."

  "This ain't over, girlie," Bruiser muttered.

  "Nnn...nnnghhh…" Rook groaned.

  She tried to lift her head, to look her opponent straight in the eye when suddenly, a bag was thrown over her head and everything went black.


 

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Comments: 20

thomvinson [2019-06-13 21:02:59 +0000 UTC]

Most awesome storytelling sir. Very nicely done! 

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Rob66 [2019-06-03 18:09:26 +0000 UTC]

It's really uncanny how you just "get" what makes the OC heroines of other artists/creators tick and how you nail their actions and responses. I see you do it so often with Shade and now you're doing it with Rook. It's a pleasure to read your text and see the accompanying art.

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UOKRook In reply to Rob66 [2019-06-05 14:09:19 +0000 UTC]

👍totally

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Erikksmith [2019-06-01 04:06:55 +0000 UTC]

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Knasterbart77 [2019-05-31 08:28:05 +0000 UTC]

Rook looks so small and fragile in the hands of this brute. I love how her limp body dangles. She is completely defeated.

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LordLard [2019-05-30 23:22:37 +0000 UTC]

A glorious effort from Rook indeed

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amazonarrow [2019-05-30 11:40:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow, excellent!

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Sharkfin66 [2019-05-30 06:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic !!!

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Dangerguy01 [2019-05-30 02:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Nice work. Hope you'll continue it.

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voyeurn3 [2019-05-30 00:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Bruiser is holding Rook like a hunting trophy

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ManNamedEd [2019-05-29 21:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely Stellar!!  Damn the story is SO good and your version of this character is Gorgeous!! 

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lexi-tink [2019-05-29 20:33:56 +0000 UTC]

God, you capture limp and helpless so well!  You should teach a master class on it! And Bruiser is just so smug and full of himself!  Well done!

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Curia-DD [2019-05-29 17:11:37 +0000 UTC]

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nataliesafira [2019-05-29 14:09:20 +0000 UTC]

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garlicknight [2019-05-29 12:32:39 +0000 UTC]

It’s gonna take every ounce of willpower these thugs have to not rip those pantyhose off and ravish her right there! Good thing they’re professionals 😏 Also, better soak the inside of that bag with a little chloroform, much easier to deliver a sleeping package to the boss than a struggling one!

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UOKRook [2019-05-29 10:51:14 +0000 UTC]

Ya wow. I agree with Zom. You really nailed the expression. And those legs 🥰 they go on for days. I wonder who the boss is? And what’s going to happen to her? She’s certainly in a tough spot. Thanks again I really love your take on her, you’ve captured (😐) the essence of Rook.

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OakEgg [2019-05-29 09:46:42 +0000 UTC]

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Zomgzilla [2019-05-29 08:34:05 +0000 UTC]

The boss eh? Nice setup. Rook's got some intrigue to her, for sure, so I could only wonder where this will lead. Man, I am a sucker for those legs and feet, beautifully shined in her nylons. But one thing, again, is the expression. You've mentioned MonsieurPaul before, right? Her face here really makes me think of that, which is a big compliment. Awesome lifting love it

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EclipseInPeril In reply to Zomgzilla [2019-05-29 08:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, everything I know about sexy expressions I blatantly copied... err, learned from MonsieurPaul.  I'm not a leg/feet guy but there's something about Rook's long pantyhosed legs that just sucks the camera towards them

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Zomgzilla In reply to EclipseInPeril [2019-05-29 08:59:46 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, if it works, it works. As for legs/feet, it's the variety that makes it hot. There's a huge difference between a fetish like foot worship, and just thinking the girl's got pretty legs and feet! Hehe. But yeah, I'm totally agreed about Rook. Great design

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