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devilspawn — The Road to Somewhere
Published: 2003-01-31 00:04:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description They all said that it didn\'t lead anywhere. I disagreed.

A pale shimmer of light glinted over the rough, black surface o the smoldering road. A high sun above cast an angry white light down on the tall, still prairies grasses. Still.

It had been just a week since the horrible storm swept through the wilderness. Screaming winds, beating rains, and thunderous roars had fled from the ominous black clouds. THe ground quickly turned to mud as the water and ice were pelted down to earth as if individually thrown by hundreds of powerful giants.

Miraculously, after many terrible days, the storm moved on. It took weeks for the plants to grow back, and the prairie had been a dismal life of grey, brown, grey, brown...

Suddenly, millions of flowers sprang up. \"Little gifts from God,\" Tom had fondly called them. Every day, if it was sunny and warm, I would get out my paint box and canvas and go to the cool, shady spot under the last remaining tree in the field. Asthe leafy boughs gently swayed above my bent head, I would depit single flowers, fields, and even sections of the blank road using my oils and brushes. In the speckled light, I created masterpieces.
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Comments: 4

devilspawn [2004-01-29 02:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh the spelling and /s and ah! *redoes this* Oh, and thanks for the comment about the exclamations...Working that out now!

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devilspawn [2004-01-29 02:27:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh the spelling and /s and ah! *redoes this*

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skyebluedream [2003-02-02 05:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Seems finished to me...? Alas but you are the closest to the depths of your own narrations that I know not.

Renegade Purple Smurf.

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gangstapranksta [2003-01-31 05:18:08 +0000 UTC]

i love it! i think it creates a really wonderful image. reminds me of a song written about mt. st. helens by mirah. although you use a lot of exclamations like "quickly" "miraculously" and "suddenly" together. maybe try to work that out? it's great no matter what. i especially like the end.

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