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Published: 2011-08-27 10:42:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1587; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 0
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[OFF THE WALL] (updated)turn today into something beautiful...
- > dA background ([link] )
- > the guy ([link] )
- > the bed
- > the lever ([link] )
thank you for providing the stock images here on dA!
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Comments: 34
This work surely has a expressionist feel. It is quite lovely.
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This feeling inside me says it's time I was gone
Clear head, new life ahead
It's time I was king, now not just one more pawn
Fly by night, away from here
Change my life again
Fly by night, goodbye my dear
My ship isn't coming and I just can't pretend
Moon rise, thoughtful eyes
Staring back at me from the window beside
No fright or hindsight
Leaving behind that empty feeling inside
Fly by night, away from here
Change my life again
Fly by night, goodbye my dear
My ship isn't coming and I just can't pretend
Fly by night, away from here
Change my life again
Fly by night, goodbye my dear
My ship isn't coming and I just can't pretend
Start a new chapter
Find what I'm after
It's changing every day
The change of the seasons
Is enough of a reason
To want to get away
Quiet and pensive
My thoughts apprehensive
The hours drift away
Leaving my homeland
Playing a lone hand
My life begins today
Fly by night, away from here
Change my life again
Fly by night, goodbye my dear
My ship isn't coming and I just can't pretend
My ship isn't coming and I just can't pretend
Fly by night, away from here
Change my life again
Fly by night, goodbye my dear
My ship isn't coming and I just can't pretend
My ship isn't coming and I just can't pretend
My ship isn't coming and I just can't pretend
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I'm speechless..
never got something like this.. have to read it again...
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COLUMBUS OHIO 'BIG CITY'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ooh, this is really a beautiful piece of work!
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I love the concept you are trying to convey here. And the line "turn today into something beautiful" changes the perspective that this image is not only dark, but gives it light and hope. I wish the guy and the lever could somehow have connected with each other more because at first it confused me. Other than that, great work
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thanx a lot for your comment!
I think of creating this concept in colors again and I sure will try to give your tipps a try!
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I really love the writing on the wall. It changes the whole emotion in the piece. Wonderful work!
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I love this concept! You could integrate the guy a bit more and add some drama if you gave him a strong shadow on the right-hand side, since the light is coming from the window on the left. It also seems like the text doesn't quite line up with the perspective, but that could just be me...*squints at it*
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thank you - any idea how to make it better?
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I am sorry I am a noob in this but what you can do is make it more dramatic.Maybe add something to the wall or something that dramatizes the whole things more.
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thanx a lot for your comment
maybe someday I'll create a complete new version containing all tipps of deviants here
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thank you.
after uploading it I looked again and think I will modify it a bit more..
there are still some parts.....
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