Faen [2005-08-13 11:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Lookin' great, Tony. If possible, the walls could be a touch darker, but it's not really that neccessary in my opinion; it looks great, and I'm very impressed. (Adrienne, of course, is a terrific model, as always.)

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dissimilus [2005-08-13 00:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Aw, you shouldnt have changed it. I liked it, and it made sense. People should understand the whole Model/Friend thing. You should rename it "SLUT (the photo, not the model) Ah well. Still looks cool. Awesome job.
-L

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duiniel [2005-08-12 08:08:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah, you pussy, changing the title. You're not supposed to aquiesce to the whim of the people until you're rich and famous! That's called selling out. Loser.

...Love you! ._.;;

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Vampress-Katora [2005-08-12 07:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Huh... I guess I'm the only one who got it... (understood)... I thought the title was fine and everything. Hmmph. I liked it the way it was. I saw the title and then I saw the picture of Adrienne and I immediately knew she was a model, because a) Adrienne is obviously not a slut, and you of all people know that, and b) well... Tony would never say that about Adrienne. I do like the little manipulation changes the John suggested (like the "slut" written on her arm...). I was a little apprehensive about those, but I liked the title and the poem. It... made sense. Even though... nevermind. My point is -- Your work's awesome Tony!!! *huggles you forever*

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Faen [2005-08-11 10:10:42 +0000 UTC]

It all turned out most excellently, although I'm not sure I approve of the writing on the wall. It does look like part of the stonework, you did pretty well with that, but the printing is too neat, it seems a touch ridiculous. I know what you were trying to do, but it doesn't quite work. It takes away from the tragedy of the figure the picture is supposed to focus upon--it's just unneccessary symbolism. Also--I really do hate to say it--but I don't really feel the "slut" in Adrienne's figure here. She appears to be someone destroyed and diseased, most definitly, even automatonesque, but not really slutty. It's a beautiful piece of work, Tony, but perhaps it might need some reconsideration. If it all makes sense to you, however, and you really feel that nothing is wrong with it, then the artist's eye is always paramount; no changes need be made.

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Daeorn [2005-08-11 07:47:06 +0000 UTC]

Okay... I'm gonna clear this all up now..

I used the wrong choice of words to describe the photograph...

One.. this photograph has NOTHING to do with Adrienne! She is simply a model.

Two... what I ment to say is that this person in the photograph is like a slut she is SPREADING the disease of hate and spite.

Three... the rust on her arms... is supposed to represent the "hate and spite" or the "disease". Heh, no one really got it but yeah.. that is what it is..

So I guess I need to change the title... but I'm to lazy and yeah.. thats what I thought of when I made the photo... so.. take it as it is... Love you all.

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Ruoniette [2005-08-11 04:38:11 +0000 UTC]

oh tonapolis! she is not that slutty, i mean come on! lol! sweety the picture looks lovely. i love how you stayed with kind of dull colors to accent your model, it has a nice asthetic flow to the picture.
~~~Jen~~~

<- hee hee hee, silly rabbits! those tricks are for kids!

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vankiyoshi [2005-08-11 04:20:00 +0000 UTC]

How dare you say Adrienne is a slut, we all now she just has sudden sexual urges that drive her to ravage random men!!!! But the picture is ok, It doesn't go together, there are elements that don't relate to anything else which make it hard to look at. But Of course I couldn't get in to stupid photo, so what do I know?

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rinshae [2005-08-10 23:25:28 +0000 UTC]

she looks more like a murdurer than a slut from her arms looking like they are drenched in blood But I like that effect. it looks nice

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Citron-Lightbulb [2005-08-10 22:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Aww...it's sad to label people...

I kind of like the rusty-looking stuff on her arms. It oddly matches the walls. Maybe there should be some other element of that rusty color somewhere in the picture?

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caught-between-tears [2005-08-10 21:43:18 +0000 UTC]

haha. I feel like a whore. But really, it's fucking awesome. *kisses*

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