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Published: 2011-02-08 05:51:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 13397; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 691
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HIT "DOWNLOAD". IT'S LONG AS HELL.Well, I just posted this elsewhere, and I figured I haven't posted in a while, so here's something completely random. I should never do this, because people get all pissed off when I never actually finish my writing.
I am, in all likelihood, never going to finish this. So don't get your hopes up.
It's not much. In fact, it's probably a little heavy for some of you- it's got some pretty intense (albeit safe and non-graphic, of course) unwilling Hiccup. I tend to write Hiccup as quite the... uh, protester. So if that doesn't appeal to you, please don't read it. I don't want you to have to eyebleach or anything.
This is an excerpt from my second in-progress HTTYD vore fic (as of today, I currently have FOUR unfinished vore stories, which in all likelihood will remain unfinished. I'm pathetic. XD)
So here you go.
This contains:
-Toothless/Hiccup (male dragon eating male human)
-Non-consentual (intensely emotional) soft nonsexual oral vore (for the first time for both characters in this particular story's assumed canon)
-Smells and slime
-Movie spoilers for "How to Train Your Dragon" (it takes place post-movie)
-References to a book that you've never read (which probably won't be intrusive)
-Digestion scare (in this excerpt, it's implied that digestion is occurring, but in later, undisplayed parts of the story, this is shown to be all in Hiccup's head)
If you find any of the above objectionable, please use your own discretion in your decision to read. You have been warned.
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Comments: 74
Cheesefritters In reply to ??? [2015-08-02 23:32:14 +0000 UTC]
I did finish one! Enter the Nightmare cheesefritters.deviantart.com/… .
I've finished two other stories but they're fluffy porn things I wrote as a joke. I totally agree though, it's kind of a shame these things never got finished. I still look at them from time to time but I'm just not much of a writer most of the time. For whatever reason the bug's either on or off and it's usually off :C
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beetlesbabes [2014-09-05 06:24:48 +0000 UTC]
I love this piece! I love how this could actually end up happening in the actual shows/movies. You said this was an excerpt, so where is the original fic? I would love to read it!
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Cheesefritters In reply to beetlesbabes [2014-09-09 10:40:12 +0000 UTC]
I never finished it. I still look at it from time to time, though it's starting to get a little old. Trust me, I'd probably post it here if it was ever done.
I think if I finish one of these old things it's going to be Snow Story; can't remember if I posted part of that here or not.
Thanks!
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beetlesbabes In reply to Cheesefritters [2014-09-24 04:00:29 +0000 UTC]
I believe you did post snow story. That's the one where there is a famine in the winter and Astrid thinks toothless ate hiccup, right? All I know is you write quite well and I like your style. You've kept it to where hiccup and toothless' s relationship has stayed true to the the friendship and not really gone any farther and everything is pretty comical or endearing/comforting. U kept to the style dreamworks created. I hope to see more.
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Cheesefritters In reply to beetlesbabes [2014-10-18 14:44:00 +0000 UTC]
I posted a deleted scene from that story, but it's not part of the original, which I still need to finish. LOL
Thanks so much! It's so fuuuuun. I'm just so slow and spotty when it comes to stories.
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Cheesefritters In reply to A-hardie [2014-05-31 04:08:05 +0000 UTC]
Technically I never posted them. LOL
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killjoy421 [2014-04-08 00:24:15 +0000 UTC]
hrm i can see it....maybe cause i got GOOGLE CHROME XD
Google Chrome Ftw
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killjoy421 [2014-04-08 00:06:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow so this is supposed to be long?
I finished reading it in about 7 minutes
lol
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coop500 [2012-07-04 21:42:03 +0000 UTC]
wow i know you get this a lot but i think its well written good job i normaly do not like vore but this is really good
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Cheesefritters In reply to coop500 [2012-07-05 20:26:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked this!
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coop500 In reply to Cheesefritters [2012-07-06 00:50:11 +0000 UTC]
np i hope you make more stories of toothless and hiccup
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Cheesefritters In reply to coop500 [2012-07-06 01:02:11 +0000 UTC]
I should finish this one!
I have several HTTYD stories in progress, but not going fast. XD
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coop500 In reply to Cheesefritters [2012-07-06 03:33:01 +0000 UTC]
oh cool i like the ones with toothless and hiccup the best
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gmaster350 [2011-08-13 01:50:28 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure if it is something to do with dA upgrading servers or something, but now it lets me see it without going to 'download'.
Shows "powered by Google docs"
but, it's SO MUCH BETTER.
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Cheesefritters In reply to gmaster350 [2011-08-13 03:17:26 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap, that's weird. XD
Yeah, I don't know why it effs up my word documents. I've been screwing around with them here lately since I'll hopefully be posting something soon.
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gmaster350 In reply to Cheesefritters [2011-08-16 05:32:06 +0000 UTC]
Do you have google or google docs account? if not, then maybe that's why I can see it.
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Cheesefritters In reply to gmaster350 [2011-08-16 23:13:55 +0000 UTC]
I don't know. I doubt that would affect DA.
My guess is DA just revamped.
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capyosa [2011-02-23 19:54:00 +0000 UTC]
pftttttttttt youuuuuuuuuu whyyyyyyyyyy ;A; i wish to read moreeeeeeeeeeeeee -grabby hands- IT IS SO AMZINGGGGGGGGGG ;O;
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Cheesefritters In reply to capyosa [2011-02-24 00:44:52 +0000 UTC]
XD
BUUUUUUTTTTT I'MMMMMM INNNN COLLEGGGGGGGE AND HAVEEEEEEE A DEFEEEECTIVE BRAIIIIIIIN.....
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capyosa In reply to Cheesefritters [2011-02-26 21:10:16 +0000 UTC]
BAAAAAADDDDDDDDD DEFECTIVE BRAIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNN YOUR STORIES ARE TO GOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDD i just want to sit and read themssssss
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Cheesefritters In reply to capyosa [2011-02-28 00:15:54 +0000 UTC]
XDXD Yeah, me and writing... we have a bizarre relationship. XP
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capyosa In reply to Cheesefritters [2011-03-10 03:58:34 +0000 UTC]
ahhhh but that just means you are a true artist XD
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Cheesefritters In reply to bighttydfan [2011-02-20 17:55:55 +0000 UTC]
I have posted it here.
There's a button to the very upper right that says "Download File." It's beneath the Favorite and Collect keys. Click it.
Hence why it says 'Hit download' in the author's comments...
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Cheesefritters In reply to bighttydfan [2011-02-20 20:39:36 +0000 UTC]
And... you didn't find it? ._.
Here's an easier version.
[link]
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bighttydfan In reply to Cheesefritters [2011-02-20 20:48:37 +0000 UTC]
i did still working on it and why don't u do a vore comics
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Cheesefritters In reply to bighttydfan [2011-02-20 21:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Of this? Because I'm not done with "Something Fishy."
Plus, drawing takes time. It's not like "POOF" there's a drawing. Otherwise, I'd have hundreds of deviations on here by now. It takes a lot of time and motivation that I don't have.
Art is not easy, even (especially) for artists.
And as I see it, there's really no reason for me to tell the same story twice. XP I might illustrate some of this sometime (in fact, I actually already have), but a full comic isn't necessary at all.
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bighttydfan In reply to Cheesefritters [2011-02-21 06:04:25 +0000 UTC]
something fishy and them this is a fishy story
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LoneWolfDragon [2011-02-16 11:28:24 +0000 UTC]
*points* YOU!!
...
Have turned me into a HTTYD Vore fan! (IDK if this is a good thing or not...) Can't wait to read more!
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Cheesefritters In reply to LoneWolfDragon [2011-02-17 04:00:48 +0000 UTC]
XD
I could think of worse things. XD
Thanks. I'm trying, but my inspiration is spread out over 3-4 different stories, a comic, and a bunch of other artistic projects, soooo.... XD
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Cheesefritters In reply to bighttydfan [2011-02-12 19:16:16 +0000 UTC]
It's a good practice to read the artist's comments before you read a story or comment.
Hit download.
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DR4WNOUT [2011-02-09 17:45:27 +0000 UTC]
I thought that this was awesomely well written. The descriptions of Toothless are pretty damn precise to what the actual dragon would be thinking, and simple he thinks too. Also, Hiccup's parts, especially where he gets his leg ripped off is pretty damn good writing. I feel like the word "buddy" was in there WAAAY too much XD But I shove it in there all the time as well.
Still, the vore sequence was done in great detail, as well as the whole part where Hiccup is in his stomach, and he keeps getting squished and cramped. Awesome writing, and I really think you should upload this once it's done.
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Cheesefritters In reply to DR4WNOUT [2011-02-11 16:57:28 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, thanks.
I think what I was trying to do is keep up a nervous chatter, which Hiccup kind of does in the movie when he's distressed. I didn't do it well, though. XP
How else can you do vore? XDXD
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Alpha568 [2011-02-09 07:02:15 +0000 UTC]
And I thought that having talent for drawing meant no real talent for writing...
Your deviation proved that I was wrong.
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Cheesefritters In reply to Alpha568 [2011-02-09 08:04:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you're still quite right. I can finish tons of drawings, but I've never once finished a single piece of personal writing. I either submit it in disconnected pieces or never at all. ;
Thanks, though. : )
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ShadowedLightning [2011-02-08 23:16:21 +0000 UTC]
That was beautifully written, and so intense! The emotion is so vivid, you can really feel Hiccup's terror and Toothless's desire to protect him.
It's... I... Wow. Just... Fantastic, I haven't read something that left me so amazed in a long, long time. You really have skill with this, it's just... I'm in awe.
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Cheesefritters In reply to ShadowedLightning [2011-02-09 03:21:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. I'm really pleased that you liked it. I put a lot of work into it.
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ShadowedLightning In reply to Cheesefritters [2011-02-10 00:55:54 +0000 UTC]
It really shows that you put a lot of effort into it, and it really is just amazing! ^_^
...huh, I coulda sworn I 'd this already. o_O Gotta fix that.
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Cheesefritters In reply to Renamon-dreamer [2011-02-08 22:52:42 +0000 UTC]
Eh.
I'm working on something totally different right now. XDXD
It's not really a cliff hanger, right? He's going to be let out, isn't he? ;D
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