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Silver Moonlight - Adjusted — Description

I wasn't happy with my previous version, so asked for help. @Ferroth gave me some great insights which I followed, and now I think this picture works much better! So, what I've changed is:
- the 3 mid-ground trees are closer together to make them just one feature instead of 3. I took some shortcuts on this so they have some faint pale lines, but I'm more interested in composition at this point.
- Moved the distant trees *much* further back so they're more obviously separate from the midground trees
- Changed the moon's spots to grey so they don't look too much like the pink leaves...
- ...which I changed to a much darker colour. They are supposed to be in silhouette, after all.
I decided to keep the stars, because without them the scene looks too blue/purple.
Now, looking at this picture, it feels right to me. There's negative space (if you don't count stars as taking up space) so I feel I can 'breathe' in it.
Thanks again, Ferroth!