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I'm...shy
Published: 2012-07-16 17:15:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 40082; Favourites: 775; Downloads: 1562
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I woke up the next morning, again, feeling as happy and energetic as ever. So we were technically going out now. It was official. I hadn't told Pinkie Pie yet as I wanted to see how things go. Even if I wanted to blab to all of ponyville what was going on. I knew Fluttershy was a bit more conservative about it all so I needed to respect that.

It was the day of the butterfly migration and I flew to where Fluttershy told me to meet her. It was in a large field with barley any trees. She said it was easier for the butterflies to fly through them instead of bumping into stuff. I hovered over the area, scanning to see if I could find that yellow pony. I already saw her sitting near a bush. I smiled and flew over to her. "Fluttershy!" I called.

She turned to see me, her face beaming. "Rainbow Dash! Hurry! It's just about to start!" she urged, patting the seat beside me.

I landed and ran over to where she was, near her. Our forelegs were intertwined and I felt a warm fuzzy feeling inside. It really did feel right to be with her. I hadn't even noticed the silence when she finally spoke. "See, Rainbow! See!" she exclaimed, pointing with her hoof.

I looked up and saw Butterflies spread out everywhere across the field. My jaw dropped, not out of beauty but out of astonishment. How could they be content to move so SLOW?! I tried my best to hide the boredom I was experiencing as I could tell she was truly enjoying herself. I rested my hoof under my chin. This was going to really blow.

After only ten minutes I was beginning to get anxious. My tail swished back and fourth in aggravation. I wanted to burst into the clouds and just fly fast for these slow little guys. But I knew it'd break Fluttershy's heart if I up and left. And plus, I couldn't bear to leave her side. Still, there must have been something to pass the time...

I lifted my head up to look at her, she hardly noticed me and was perplexed by the butterflies. Just looking at her I couldn't resist. I knew I shouldn't move in to kiss her, but at the same time I wanted to so bad. I wanted to see how she'd react. I bit my bottom lip, resisting the urge. More and more butterflies began to show up and she squealed in delight. "Oh! Have you ever seen anything so beautiful??" she asked, looking up at them.

Involuntarily, I let this phrase slip out. "Y-yeah. I'm looking right at her..." I said finally. Her eyes shot open and she turned her head away from me in embarrassment.

"Dashie...."

She was so cute when she did this, I couldn't resist. I took Fluttershy's cheek in my hoof and turned her to face me. I quickly moved in to plant a kiss on her lips. It was sort of forced and rough and I knew that must have made her uncomfortable. As soon as she turned her head away my heart sank.

"Ah! S-sorry, Fluttershy I didn't mean to I just..oh man. I knew you wouldn't like that.."

Fluttershy slowly shook her head. "It's not that...it's just. I'm...shy." she sighed, keeping her head turned away from me.

I nodded slowly. "You don't have to be shy with me anymore, Fluttershy. You don't need to hide..." I took her cheek again in my hoof and attempted to kiss her again, this time she didn't hesitate.

My first kiss was everything I imagined it'd feel like. My stomach full of these butterflies fluttering through them, my heart racing, my face blushing. I opened my eye a bit to see her expression. She looked like she was really enjoying it. Her eyes were squeezed shut and every so often I'd hear a soft moan whenever the kiss got more passionate.

Finally, however, it was too much for her and she pulled away reluctantly. "Aha....sorry. I'm so embarrassed..." she said, hiding behind her mane and forelegs again.

I smiled down at her and nuzzled up against her, gently licking her forehead to groom her. "That was awesome...." I said, resting my wing over her.

Even though she didn't respond, she sighed happily, resting her head on my forelegs, nuzzling against my chest. "Dashie...was that your first kiss...?" she asked.

I smiled and sighed happily. "Yeah....it was. And it was great."

Then it got silent again. I figured she was just as happy with it as I was. We laid there together for what seemed like only 20 minutes when it was actually all day. We talked about everything. Princess Celestia, the girls, all of our experiences together. It was just great. Not only were we getting closer on an intimate level, but on a personal level as well.

Eventually, the last of the butterflies flew overhead and we had to get going as there was no reason to be in that field. But we didn't leave. We lay there, looking up at the clouds, guessing shapes. She would come over and lay on my chest and just close her eyes, listening to my ever increasing heartbeat.

After that long gap of silence, I was the one to break it.

"Fluttershy...?" I spoke up.

"Hm?"

I gulped, afraid to even ask this question. But wanting to be better than everyone else, I asked. "Was I the best kisser out of everyone else?"

She was quiet for a moment then nodded. "Hehe...well, yes...but I think it's because you're a girl. Girls are better kissers than guys.." she giggled.

I sighed in relief, pulling her into a deep hug and shutting my eyes tightly. She was too perfect, it was too good to be true. I was afraid if I opened my eyes or let go she would just vanish into thin air.

"Dashie...you're squeezing too hard..."

My eyes shot open and I eased up a bit as I was shook back to reality. "Haha. Oh. My bad...I just...you're just..."

She looked up at me, blinking innocently.

"I'm just glad we can be together like this finally..." I admitted, smiling warmly at her.

She smiled back and shut her eyes, not saying anything. She lifted her head up and kissed me gently on the cheek. As if that was enough to say. "I am too"
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Comments: 147

HorusthePrimarch666 [2018-12-16 19:02:01 +0000 UTC]

   

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UNICORNSARECOOL23 [2017-08-18 14:54:04 +0000 UTC]

I DO NOT SHIP THIS IS NOT TRUE I DO NOT SHip it never wil... awwwww soo cute!!! Still no ship sorry!!!

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Dreali85 [2017-05-22 14:05:19 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful man. 

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Kirisoura [2015-01-29 19:17:30 +0000 UTC]

Is it bad that this showed up when I searched:
'im going down with this ship'?
 

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PinkiePie531 [2014-10-30 20:35:19 +0000 UTC]

I am fluttershy just so everyone in america know that

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RainbowFlash5000 [2014-07-28 08:23:23 +0000 UTC]

OMG OMG.....*sniff* I'm dying from all this cuteness....Make it stop...hnnng..*heart stops*...I didn't mean make my heart stop completely and kill me sheesh, the nerve

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lucemondiwinx [2014-03-29 06:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Is really really . Cute i love it

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ANGELCATZRULE [2014-03-25 00:19:51 +0000 UTC]


that's all that is needed to describe this ! it's soooooo cute!!

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CrystalZoeDestiny [2014-03-14 22:31:04 +0000 UTC]

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nati11184 [2014-03-08 17:52:29 +0000 UTC]

(/w\)

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Aerobryne [2014-03-01 17:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Personally not one for FlutterDash, but this is really adorable. And the image was really nicely done as well, I love the soft, shaded colours. This is... Nice.

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monkeyhero0 [2013-12-04 02:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Yes you are shy indeed

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EstevesAqui [2013-11-25 06:07:30 +0000 UTC]

This is so cute, you should post it in FiMfiction, one of the best FlutterDash fics i have ever saw

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SlyTheWolf [2013-05-19 16:47:32 +0000 UTC]

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wickedjr89 [2013-04-25 21:54:27 +0000 UTC]

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amandaam [2013-04-13 05:33:15 +0000 UTC]

your story is to awesome!! i love it so much!!

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SirJames314 [2013-03-30 22:22:44 +0000 UTC]

Links as requested--Ship ahoy! "Head Over Hooves - A FlutterDash Story" is up on YouTube. [link]
And Vimeo, too, as I think Germany can see it that way. [link]

Thanks again for the inspiration through your adorable art! Nothing fancy, but I thought this turned out rather cute.

I'll send you the link on your tumblr, too.

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SirJames314 [2013-03-24 10:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Say, would you mind if I included your art (with credit, of course!) in a FlutterDash video I'm putting together?

I'll send a link along when it's finished if you like.

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TheBlueNightStar88 [2013-02-24 00:09:22 +0000 UTC]

.............................................................................STRAIGHT!! THOSE PONIES ARE STRAIGHT!! THAT PICTURE IS A LIE!!

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dante0525 In reply to TheBlueNightStar88 [2013-03-09 18:49:59 +0000 UTC]

NO THEY'RE NOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!! ADMIT IT! YOU FIND IT ADORABLE!!! ADMIT IT!!!

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TheBlueNightStar88 In reply to dante0525 [2013-03-10 02:28:20 +0000 UTC]

no......it's gross mann O.o

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dante0525 In reply to TheBlueNightStar88 [2013-03-12 09:16:20 +0000 UTC]

ADMIT IT!!!!!!!

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dante0525 In reply to dante0525 [2013-03-12 09:16:29 +0000 UTC]

NAO!

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TheBlueNightStar88 In reply to dante0525 [2013-03-13 20:32:26 +0000 UTC]

i think it's really disturbing!!!!

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DashingPegasus In reply to TheBlueNightStar88 [2015-06-06 08:23:23 +0000 UTC]

HOMOPHOBE

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Sammy2526 In reply to TheBlueNightStar88 [2013-08-18 07:30:05 +0000 UTC]

haters gonna hate

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dante0525 In reply to TheBlueNightStar88 [2013-03-14 21:30:12 +0000 UTC]

NO ITS NO-you know what im stopping this argument. it's childish and stupid.

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Kirisoura In reply to dante0525 [2015-01-29 19:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Can I continue this argument about this even though it's been two years?

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Scoperocker [2013-01-23 02:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Hi, in most other places I go by Everhopeful.

I'm here in my capacity as the admin of the Fimfiction Flutterdash group , I think it's only fair to inform you that we appropriated this picture for our current banner. If this doesn't suit you, please just say so and we'll find something else.

On a more personal note, I love this story and your artwork takes up a great many slots on my list of personal favourites.

Thanks for being awesome.

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TheBadLuckCharm [2013-01-22 02:55:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh. The story is.... and the picture is.... and its all so..... AMAZING!!! You are very talented! I love this so much!

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jackcampbell123 [2012-12-14 06:41:57 +0000 UTC]

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YinReneeMoonveilYang [2012-12-08 05:36:33 +0000 UTC]

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r3inb0w-dash [2012-12-02 04:25:11 +0000 UTC]

hey you.... you are one talented person... if i could, i would do stuff like this to, but i can never figure out how to start them.. anyway... i love your stuff and stay classy Crumbz

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PancakeTurtle [2012-11-09 03:22:40 +0000 UTC]

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Bread-Crumbz In reply to PancakeTurtle [2012-11-09 05:11:52 +0000 UTC]

awwww :3

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MoralShifter [2012-10-04 02:25:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm John.

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Bread-Crumbz In reply to MoralShifter [2012-10-04 16:55:50 +0000 UTC]

YOUR COMMENTS ARE MAKING MY DAY

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MoralShifter In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-10-05 03:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Good, good.

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Insanity-Ensues [2012-08-31 00:15:27 +0000 UTC]

So much cute! Need more cute!

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STAR--CATCHERS [2012-08-21 01:41:59 +0000 UTC]

awww so cute!

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Babymonster6 [2012-08-15 20:42:10 +0000 UTC]

Aww so MA' HEART 3:

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SkunkWitch [2012-08-12 05:39:26 +0000 UTC]

o and btw, u spelled something wrong
when u said at the beginning, "It was a large field with barley any trees"
You spelled barly barley, as in the food/spice/whatever

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SkunkWitch [2012-08-12 05:37:42 +0000 UTC]

so far, the most beautiful scene in this fic

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shilvicthehedgehog [2012-08-06 02:13:14 +0000 UTC]

something tells me that all this will end bad soon

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HippieSister [2012-08-04 00:17:21 +0000 UTC]

yay, more chapters! ^^ it's too cute!

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IceDragon8624 [2012-07-31 12:26:15 +0000 UTC]

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paxtofettel [2012-07-26 14:48:32 +0000 UTC]

NOW SEE HERE! I'll have you know that a guy can be just a good of a kisser as a girl. Although, I can't talk from experience due to never having kissed a girl.

Great story.

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Bread-Crumbz In reply to paxtofettel [2012-07-27 06:51:56 +0000 UTC]

ahaa I've kissed a few guys..they all kissed awkward. Maybe I just haven't kissed the right guy!

Thanks for the comment :,3

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r3inb0w-dash In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-12-02 04:22:24 +0000 UTC]

my ex-s say that i am a great kisser... lol ^_^

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Stevingtons [2012-07-22 03:31:52 +0000 UTC]

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