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Azclect Mess sheet
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Published: 2016-02-26 01:57:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 3189; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 12
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*He's my "mascot" on the fandom, though he has his own personality and story based on mine(except the story isn't)
* Surprisingly or not, this isn't an AU, unless you think it should be (seriously, I NEED feedback).

What happened during the writing of this backstory:

“Welp, time to write the backstory for my oc!”

4300 words later

“Welp, nobody is going to read this, better do a TL;DR”

TL;DR

Azclect was born a cursed pony. A pony with fangs and that eats meat. He needed to run away from his house whem he was still a colt because pther ponies hated him. He went to the cursed ponies town named bone town with the help of a wizard name Icarus, who he really liked as a friend. There he made friends with a pony named Silent Scope and met the town ruler, the Bone King. Some time later Silent Scope got really depressed and Azlclect made a little comic for him to cheer the guy up, when Silent got over his depression because of the drawing Azclect got his cutie mark. Some years later the cursed ponies captured a mare named Lisa, they were going to make her their lunch, but Azlcect sacrificed all he had constructdd to save her. Icarus find Azclect and took him to a skeleton pony named Chloe. Chloe became basically a mother to Azclect and Lisa, who became friends too. One day an explorer from Lisa's town find them and Chloe thought it was better to send them to live on their new house ClawVille.

Azclect is lazy, irresponsible, impatient and likes to make others think that he's grumpy when in reality he's agitated and likes attention. He is still friends with Lisa who's also his only friend as he betrayed Silent long ago. Azclect also tries to do always good, even if it's his perspective of good. Azclect also says that he doesn't like kids, but in reality he loves them. He also likes to draw a lot.


NOTE: I highly recommend reading the entire story ESPECIALLY because I really, really want feedback on it.


“Hello ponies! My name is Azclect Magick, and I am a cursed pony! A cursed pony is a pony born with fangs. This happens every once and a while here in Equestria because of an evil wizard who released this curse a long time ago, I'm sorry for the lack of information but the history about this is kind of lost or… hidden? Anyway, my parents were unlucky to be here in Equestria studying magic when they… “made” me…

…

...this history is awful isn't it?

Sigh… Another fail… You wont believe the amount of times I've been trying to record my history, but I can't get it right! Mostly because I need to explain a freaking lot of things and I'm not really good with words… Ah, you know what? I don't care! I'll continue this one anyway because I'm to lazy to do another. I've given up too many projects already, but this time I'm going to end this!

Before I get into my species, let's get into some of my history. My parents came to study magic in Equestria for some years. They… had a romantic relationship and after some time I was born. Neither of them knew what to do with a baby with fangs(yeah, I was born with this things) so they asked Celestia's help, who attended them as long as the word “fangs” got to her ears. She told them about the danger that they were going to run into by raising me and offered one of her best wizards to basically be my babysitter. My parents where like “Whaaaaaaaat? We can take care of a carnivorous beast, we don't need no help from some sassy princess!” ok, they didn't say that but they did not accept her offer and decided to stay in Equestria for some time, at least until I grew up a little. They also decided to teach me the equestrian language before their kingdom's language because I kind of needed to socialize(not that I did/do). Around the middle of my childhood I started thinking that I was ruining my parent's life, as they were always being harassed by other ponies for having “the weird colt” or things like that. This continued until one day, when I bit part of a bully's ear off (yeah, forgot to mention, I was bullied) and the citizens of the town went nuts. An angry mob was outside my house and they were going to burn it if I, the most best greatest incredible son of all haven't made a sacrifice. The furious mob was outside my house all like “yeah, we're gonna burn this thing down!” my parents were trying to argue with them outside the house like “He's just an inoffensive colt!” but I wasn't an inoffensive colt, and I knew that. As I did not want my parents to be hurt, I quickly packed some things, opened the front door, gave a last hug on my parents and walked through the mob, everypony who tried to touch me received a growl in exchange. I remember an old lady saying “shouldn’t we be burning him?” but I think my stupidity (or courage?) left them so astonished that they left me pass by. Sigh... the only thing I left for my parents was a drawing of our family with the words “we'll meet again” on it, but I don't think that's possible anymore... Gee, this history must have attracted some onion ninjas here on my house. Anyway, I will get a glass of water because my throat isn't made out of steel… if that makes sense… Be right back!

Back again! Let's see… yeah, I just left my family. So, I never cried and regretted an action that much in my life like that night, but there was no going back. I checked my supplies and… I had some snacks, my pencil case, paper and a picture of my parent's on my bag, that wasn't near enough to survive on the wild world. But then, Mrs. luck knocked on my door for the first time. Remember that wizard Celestia was going to send to babysit me? So, he was informed about the incident and was right after the town exit, waiting for me (the guy was/is quick). His name was/is Icarus Firewave, he told me about a moving place named Bone Town, a place where only cursed ponies live, and I could live there. Icarus offered himself to take me to the town but warned me that cursed ponies live in a totally different way then normal ponies and if I went to the town, there was no going back. I had no choice but to accept the offer and went with him in our adventure that would lead to outside of Equestria. Icarus was a pretty cool guy, he didn't talk that much but always answered me patiently when I asked something. He was really intelligent and explained me everything about cursed ponies during our journey, he was also a damn good wizard and saved my flank a lot of times. I remember becoming really sad when he told me that we were at the town and now he would need to go back to his home. I knew that was going to happen, so I gave him a present I did the night before: a drawing of both of us defeating a manticore. Icarus wasn't expecting that and just looked at me with a smile, like he had never done. He then walked way, letting me alone with only the directions of the town.

Fifteen minutes of walking and I was really fearing that Icarus left me in the middle of nowhere, but finally something appeared. That was the first time I saw another cursed pony. He was dark blue and brown, Icarus had told me that all cursed ponies had darker colors than usual, apparently he was right. I presented myself and the pony also did so. I didn't know, but I had just met my future friend called Silent Scope. He was about my age and was apparently watching the entrance of the town in case of Food and/or new recruits appear. By the time I thought Food were just any animal, but I will get to what it actually is later. Silent then took me to the town, in the way there we talked a little and that was kind of the start of our before-mentioned friendship. We got to the town and I was received as a friend by all the other cursed ponies, I met much more ponies than I had ever met in my life and all of them went out of their way to welcome me. Silent took me to the leader, the bone king. Icarus had told me that cursed ponies have amplified abilities, earth ponies are stronger, pegasi are faster and unicorns are incredibly powerful (though pegasus and unicorns are really rare). The leader is a unicorn, for sure the biggest unicorn I've ever seen. Icarus probably looked like he had the size of a foal next to him! Ok, no that big, but the pony was a mountain. He welcomed me and told his name: Mountain Crusher, the Bone King. Hah, see, I told you the guy was a mountain… Ain’t I funny? Sigh, anyway, Mountain told me that I could live there as long as I kept the town existence in secret and never disrespect any law imposed by him or else he would need to assimilate me. What is assimilate? Well, any unicorn cursed pony can mind-control his chaps and transform them in basically a robot with little to no effort, nopony wanted that. Silent's mentor offered himself to be my mentor and guide too. My life on the bone town was then started and I finally had a place to call home.

During my time on the bone town, I discovered that I was a gem on the middle of cursed ponies. Silent told me that the majority of them has some mental or physical problem besides the fangs, if the first case is way too aggravated, Mountain assimilates them. I asked him if he had anything and he told me that the voices on his head never shut up and that his eyes often squint. I think my problem is on my freaking way-too-long tail. I could cut it, bu I'm too lazy and it grows too fast (two days to max size). Anyway, our mentor taught us how to use our strength and how to control our hunger. I learned how to fight, how to find food, how to build things and how to craft new things, but I never stopped drawing. I drew each “highlight” of the day and stored it on a bag. The majority of cursed ponies are athletic and like much more physical then mind activities, but I was always the opposite. Because of this I was quickly noticed by the others “Hey, you're the artist colt aren't ya?” they said. My mentor told me that I was about to start a whole new era for the town history, cursed ponies would enter the artistic world and I would be the leader. I never liked or will like to be a leader, so that scared my digested lunch out of me. Yeah, those were my first five months on the town, a lot of things happened during this time. Silent and I were the bestest of best friends, he was really getting into the watcher and hunter job, he got his cutie mark on watching and was going really well on his path. Me, by the other hoof, was just improving my drawing skills and starting to write, I even abandoned some physical activities. My mentor told me that I was a really good fighter too, but I did not want that, I didn't really knew what I wanted... until one day. This day, I decided to stay home and draw instead of going to hunt with Silent. Sure he was disappointed, but I had done that before and I would go with him in the next day. I did not know what was about to happen. Silent got home with a giant scar on one eye, blinded. He was attacked by a giant spider and did not manage to defeat it without loosing one eye, if at least I was there... But, just for you to have an idea of how much Silent was my friend, he did not get angry with me. He got angry with himself for not being able to defeat a simple giant spider (did I say that we were colts?). I did not know what to do, the whole town became sad for Silent and he became really depressed. I did not know what to do to light him up, he did not even want to hunt with me. So I did what I knew: I drew for him. I drew a little comic with this stupid character named “Mr. Triangle” where he lost a fight for a puddle but still got his head up and fought back, becoming the best puddle fighter on history. Nowadays it seems really stupid and useless, but Silent found it funny. He thanked me and slowly got back to training, now without an eye. In this moment I got my butt mark: A pencil drawing what seems to be a triangle. We cursed ponies have this destroyed cutie mark, that's why the triangle is all shaky and the pencil is screwed. And as I got my mark, I earned a present: The scarf I use until today. Now my life was complete: a home, friends and my cutie mark! I was so happy and nothing could stop that happiness!

Whaaaaat? Something stopped that happiness? How unexpected! Two years later I was at home and Silent was on his watch turn. Suddenly, our mentor came in and told me that Silent had spotted and captured Food! I was pretty confused because Silent had brought a lot of animals to the town already but nopony made a party out of it, what could have happened this time? Remember I said that I would get to the meaning of Food later? Yeah, Silent was proudly walking in front of two cursed pegasi who were exhibiting something as a trophy, it looked like... a pony? Not only a pony, a mare, also about my age. She was carried until the town center, where the pegasi locked her on a cage and the Bone King showed up. He told all of us that we were presented with a blessing once again, another Clawvillian had showed up! I did not remembered what a Clawvillian was, but the filly was wearing a ripped uniform with claws drawn on it. Mountain started mocking her, the whole town was laughing, except me. He then told us to stop, and asked the mare if she was going to give the location of the town or... sigh, this is gross... or be our lunch on the next day. I thought he was joking, I really did, but when she said “no” he told everyone to package our things, the bone town would move again after tomorrow's banquet. At home, I could not sleep. Silent was out, parting with our mentor and, for the first time, I did not want to draw. I then made another sacrifice. Silent had the key to her cage, as he had locked her. So I took it and went to the town center. The guards were also partying, security wasn't needed as we all supposedly hated the mare. There, I looked at her, she had a bit mark on her left leg and apparently a lot of my friends had thrown eggs and rotten meat at her... when I got next to her she started crying and close her eyes as if she was preparing herself to more pain. I looked at her for some minutes, one thousand thoughts passed through my mind until I said “Fuck it” and opened the cage. All cursed ponies are male, so seeing a mare was something incredible for me. She looked at me and I said some things to comfort her. She hugged me and said thank you at least fifty times. I decided to take her to the town border, but when I turned back... Silent. He was there, looking at me with a confused, angry and disappointed all the same time expression on his face. I... my heart was separated in half at that moment. But I knew the right thing to do, with a terrible pain on my heart, I told Silent to get out of my way or else I would need to fight him. He had some vegetarian food on his back, I don't think he liked the idea of the banquet as much as I did. Silent tried telling me from where she was and then I remembered: A long time ago, our mentor told us about ClawVille and how the city ruler hides him or herself from the cursed ponies because a long time ago their family refused to pretty much save our species. That's why all the Clawvillians became Food. I still told him that that wasn't right and I prepared myself to fight. But, just so I could feel the worst possible, Silent said that he wasn't going to fight me. He told that I could save her, but I would need to go along and never show my face again. We stayed there looking at each other for some minutes, the mare was really quiet looking from Silent to me and then to Silent again. I apologized to Silent, put the mare on my back and ran way. With me, only my scarf, I left all my drawings behind, either to be burned or to be hated. That moment I betrayed everypony who I loved and who believed in me, but the worst of all, I betrayed Silent, my best friend to this day. Damn onion ninjas! I need water again, I'll be back!

Ok, I'm back. Let's see... yeah, I was at the betraying drama part. Sigh, Silent was the bro of all the bros y'know? He's one of the reasons I don't like to socialize with others, nopony is going to be as cool as he was. Anyway, me and the mare ran way. We walked for hours, I used my scarf as a bandage for her leg (it still smells like blood) and we were without anywhere to go. Soon the Bone King would send his hunters to find us and our lives would be over, nice plan I had huh? I was starting to quietly panic when the pony on my back said “Lisa” I was like “well, that's a nice name, but wh... oh.” Yeah, her name was Lisa Lightwing she told me that she was exploring the area when Silent attacked her, then she ended up here. She apologized for ruining my life but I said that it wasn't that big of a problem(but it was). We(or I) walked a little bit more until I heard cursed ponies on the distance, apparently more than ten of them were searching for us and we had no chance of surviving. But lady luck knocked on my door once again, I started running from the cursed ponies and ended up stumbling on something... or somepony? Icarus was there looking at me like Celestia looked at Twilight on her vision at the season three prem... oh wait, no fourth wall jokes. Anyway. Icarus told me to close my eyes and apparently he teleported me along with Lisa. Icarus told me that I had lost that life opportunity, though he admired and was proud of my reasons to do so. He said that I had one more place to go before Celestia's protection became the only option and showed me where we were: The Everfree forest. He told me that there we would find somepony to take care of us and that the bone town would never be able to find us… at least for some time. I asked him how did he know I was in trouble, he just said goodbye and teleported away. I don't know what you think, but that seems a pretty vague answer for me. I faced the forest and said to Lisa “Here we go!” so we entered the Everfree forest without any hint of what would happen. Using my experience, I built a tent with what the forest had to offer and prepared some food for me and Lisa, the sun was already appearing on the horizon, but I did not want to sleep even one minute that night. Luckily we were attacked only by two little monsters that night, but I took care of them.

When Lisa woke up she was already feeling better, but we still needed to take care of that leg. My scarf was already red instead of green and I did not want to lose it. I carried her for some time until I heard movement. I knew how dangerous the forest is and I prepared myself to battle, so, from behind a bush came… a skeleton? Yes. Chloe, the skeleton. She presented herself in a very friendly way and instantly started taking care of Lisa's leg. I did not believe a skeleton could be so likable and friendly, but Chloe is. She offered us a house, made food for us, took care of us and even wanted to tell a story for me to sleep. She did not seemed surprised for me being a cursed pony and just told me to brush my fangs before talking. Time passed, apparently that was my new home and Lisa and I started talking with each other while helping Chloe clean our house and take care of animals. While Silent was a chill, organized and calm guy, Lisa is a loud, clumsy and silly mare who never. Stops. Talking. On our first conversation she was already calling me Asckly and making in-jokes that doesn't quite make sense. Sure there is more to her, but those are her basic and most noticeable traits. Chloe basically adopted us as her kids… uh… teenager kids. She seemed to take the idea of creating two crazy teenagers as a walk on the park. She even find for me material to draw and some sports stuff to Lisa. Soon we were behaving like a family! Sure, Lisa annoyed(ys) me some times, but I still like her. Even if all this happy stuff was happening, every time I looked at my cutie mark or my scarf I remembered all the friends that I had betrayed and the life I had lost, not even Lisa's smile could make that memory go away, and to this day I still have difficulties to sleep. But I wasn't the only one. I often saw Lisa facing the horizon at night and crying a little because of her family or Chloe mentioning her past life and becoming grumpy for the rest of the day. One time she asked us about where we would go on the future and we just said that we would find a way to take her out of the forest, she seemed worried for the rest of the day. We all were depressed pussies but I think the positive energy we tried to pass to each other kept us going. Chloe seemed to be specially happy with new company. She isn't allowed to get out of the forest by the same spell that brought her back to life and the company of me and Lisa seemed to have cheered her up. Once again, I thought I was at home. A more depressed home, but still a home. I finally thought I could be happy once again… maybe for a long time?

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH crap! It seems like destiny hates me, huh? One year later, me and Lisa were collecting some herbs to Chloe when, surprise! A Clawvillian explorer! “but hey, what's the problem?” welp, it seems like I wasn't the only betrayer. Lisa had apparently ran way from ClawVille, what is not allowed unless you're an explorer, what she wasn't. The explorer was a pegasus named Flint, apparently a friend of Lisa's mother who knew Lisa and thought she was dead, he was so surprised to see her that he dismayed. We took Flint to Chloe, who healed him. When he woke up, we told him that we liked living with Chloe and that she wasn't going to let us go! But… Chloe already knew some explorers… she knew about ClawVille laws… and she knew that we would never have a normal life with her and that the city was our best bet. She told Flint that we were going with him. After that it was time to say goodbye to us. We tried arguing with her, but she just told us this:

“I know you like living with me. I like living with you too! But this old skeleton can't give you the life you deserve… sigh, please, go with Flint or else I will not be able to pardon myself… I love you”

We… we then had a group hug. Lisa cried the entire trip to ClawVille, I just stayed quiet and thought about the drawing I left behind: All three of us sleeping, with the phrase “living with you is like living in a dream” written in it, a stupid phrase, but it was just how I felt at the time. Once more, I needed to abandon home, once more I left a drawing behind. You see, all of this adventures molded me.Iwas allowed to live in ClawVille as I saved Lisa, the ponies kind of found me a hero. I am now living here, I have my job as an artist and my humble house, but I am not allowing myself to settle roots anymore. Sure I still hang out with Lisa, but I rarely get outside my house. When I do I keep a grumpy face and attitude. Yeah, I am a little grumpy sometimes but I am also a very agitated pony when I'm alone, specially when I'm listening to music. It seems like I am triggered by it. Lisa always comes to see me, we draw together, discuss books and tell bad in-jokes. I like to pretend that I hate her, especially when she “accidentally” stomps on my tail( you wont understand, it is friend stuff). I don't like eating animals, but the rats on my house are really annoying so I need to give them an end. Only here in ClawVille I discovered my worst flaw: I lack self-discipline. This is something that I am improving by now, and I'm also trying to be less stupid. Sometimes I miss Chloe or the Bone Town… or my parents… or Icarus… But I always shake my head and forget it. What's in the past is in the past, the future is what matters, right? Heh, right. After some years here I also became really cynical, I like to criticize books and other things. OH, and I hate to sleep. I always feel like I am losing time. So I sleep really late and wake really early, it kind of works but I also kind of am always tired. Welp, I guess that sums up my “little” history. It went from running away from a murderous town to being a stupid artist pretty fast didn't it? I hope you liked it/me, bye bye!”


Glossary (I guess it is needed)


Cursed Ponies: Ponies who are born with fangs and feed from meat. Tendency to have darker colors and mental o/and physical problems.

Bone town: A safe place for cursed ponies to live. The bone town is trying to find ClawVille due to an old hatred, every time they capture a Clawvillian they feed from them and the town moves as a tradition.

Skeleton pony(Chloe kind): a pony half resurrected, some bones took different format than normal skeletons and the jaw is fused with the upper part of the head, but the mouth is still able to move.

ClawVille: a hidden invisible city. Ponies who go live there are not allowed to leave or talk about the place if they do so.



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